Last edited by dannE-B; April 24th, 2006 at 03:28 PM.
this is an ongoing piece im doing for the teen challenge thread. should have it done soon
Last edited by dannE-B; April 29th, 2006 at 06:37 AM.
haha, nice T-D piece, I also participated!
only thing to mention is that your one looks Carlos inspired ,you know
watch and learn ... nothing bed, just telling you, but Im sure you know of it!
Btw, Great atmosphere!
Yea you mean the cape? I watched them a few times to get the hang of photoshop, thought it was a really cool way of doing damaged fabric...i must thank him for his wisdom, helped me a lot with photoshop.
cool sketch book. I like the poses you draw for your characters. Strong pencil work.
I really like your illustraion style, especially on the buildings and that sculpture by the fruit n veg market, the teen challenge piece is pretty damn cool as well, I'd maybe try to get some side by side comparisons of poses with and without studying the forms and anatomy, to see where your weaknesses lie.
Your studies of form are superb, really they are. Keep pushing the use of that form in complete pieces. Looks to me like you're coming along just fine. One thing I note of your art. Everything seems to "tilt" a bit. Some pieces look a little of center. Just a note for you.
He who asks is a fool for five minutes,
but he who does not ask remains a fool forever.
Thanks paddy and Klinesmoker, some very good advice. Yea your right about my images tilting, ive been trying to stop that..sometimes i have my paper on weird angles when i draw, thanks.
just these two because photobucket was going extremely slow.
Good pencil work and nice figure studies. I should do more of them myself as soon as I learn basic proportions to stop them from looking like streched rubber people
These images and the last two are from my new sketchbook, which i feel is going better than my last one. I took a look at the first page from my old sketchbook and was suprised by the improvement. I will have some more soon.
YOur line work feel good,
But watch the elbow in the last pic .I also Like your shading .I really like the shadng on the study in post 76 but ,the anatomy feels a bit weak .Work on your weak points and you'll get there.
very nice studies. and prague architectural sketches are very nice. good work.
Thanks for checking my sketchbook Prophet
Wow, you have really improved some!!!
I like your "pencil" work alot more now! but you should really
watch out proporations and facials! thats what you should practise on!
however great work, just keep it up!
I see very fast development Great stuff. I like your 'line'
Definite improvement from page 1. Work on tightening up your anatomy(should take my own advice). Wonky nipples on that last one, looks like foxy brown.