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    a mage and her pet

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    my only crit is that he seems to be holding the flame gratuitously... if he were using it to light the room or something, his arm would be extended. clutched close to the body like that, it seems unnatural.

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    thank you mackerman I'll see about working up some other possibilities. I might have to flip the staff to his other hand anyway... it was just now suggested I should also face him tward the inside of the pic. I did a really rudimentary clip job to see what it would look like



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    Wow, I don't think it's an unnatural pose, at all. I guess I just didn't see that the flame was lighting the entire room. Even then, if my pet is a bloody great spider, I'm not going to feel very concerned about anything that fits in a room. It makes him seem non-chalant and think it looks fine.

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    yeah? hmm. I do want him to seem aloof and confidant. He's elvish after all.

    well here is cleanup from the cutnpaste. Spider says : "After you I insist" (he's also missing a leg. I am already performing surgery)


    http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4533/ws46jj.jpg
    http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7814/ws60vz.jpg

    callin this one the done version.



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    I agree with Dogfood. It makes him seem like he's like "I dare you to fuck with me." Looks good so far.

    It also looks better with them both facing the right. More updates!

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    thanks VuDu.

    I'm callin the updated version in my previous post the done one and gifting it before I decide to go overboard and start coloring.

    unless someone sees some savage error, of course.

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    I would definetely reference those feet and hands, Jubs.

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    sausage fingers?

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    Feet not so well defined and the hands in general are somewhat awkward.

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    bugger. ok I'll snag a kid when they come home and get it right

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    *cough bump*

    ref'd my own hand and a broom. drew feet 'nude' then sandaled them correctly instead of the other way around tweaked the robe a little. desaturated the paper underneath a little. was a bit too brown I think.

    edit changed my mind. I like the brown better



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    Looking much better now.

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    rawr. thank you much! I got it mailed off and even managed to meet my self imposed deadline

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    yet another mage with a (supposed to be fire elemental) pet. before you even say it.. yes the hands need dire help



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    Oops! I've just notice the position of his staff. Since he is holding it infront of him, I think the staff should extend a little more to the front of his foot, so it'll look like it's planted to the ground.

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