my only crit is that he seems to be holding the flame gratuitously... if he were using it to light the room or something, his arm would be extended. clutched close to the body like that, it seems unnatural.
ambition makes you look pretty ugly
Wow, I don't think it's an unnatural pose, at all. I guess I just didn't see that the flame was lighting the entire room. Even then, if my pet is a bloody great spider, I'm not going to feel very concerned about anything that fits in a room. It makes him seem non-chalant and think it looks fine.
yeah? hmm. I do want him to seem aloof and confidant. He's elvish after all.
well here is cleanup from the cutnpaste. Spider says : "After you I insist" (he's also missing a leg. I am already performing surgery)
callin this one the done version.
Last edited by jubilee; January 9th, 2006 at 12:20 PM.
I agree with Dogfood. It makes him seem like he's like "I dare you to fuck with me." Looks good so far.
It also looks better with them both facing the right. More updates!
I'm only laughing on the outside.
My smile is just skin deep.
If you could see inside I'm really crying.
You might join me for a weep.
I would definetely reference those feet and hands, Jubs.
Feet not so well defined and the hands in general are somewhat awkward.
ref'd my own hand and a broom. drew feet 'nude' then sandaled them correctly instead of the other way around tweaked the robe a little. desaturated the paper underneath a little. was a bit too brown I think.
edit changed my mind. I like the brown better
Last edited by jubilee; January 9th, 2006 at 03:08 PM.
Looking much better now.
Oops! I've just notice the position of his staff. Since he is holding it infront of him, I think the staff should extend a little more to the front of his foot, so it'll look like it's planted to the ground.