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    Teen Challenge #1, entries

    The topic was 'Killing Machine'

    Medium was graphite yet in my case biro

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    You can challenge the dude with the title to get their title. This challenge will be held every month or so.

    MikeCorriero will be judging teen challenge #1, good luck to everyone!


    maybe we should have a teen last man standing comp
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    heres mine

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    disregard it if it's too late

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    you shouldn't have done that

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    And her is mine:

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    Considering the rules changed alot, mooftak should imo be permitted to participate. I had to restart my entry for the same reason, and I think its only fair.

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    Good luck everyone.
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    Damn, nice job everybody. I hope I'll get around to entering next time around.
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    Anders89 congratulations on being crowned the title!

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    Mike_Corriero- Can't thank you enough, great tips, realize my mistakes, and'll help in the future.

    PS. Concerning the body problems, he's supposed to be wearing a breast plate, but based on your comment, it wasn't noticable, in the future i'll try bumping it out a bit to make it more obvious.
    Thanks again!

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    Mike

    thank you so much for taking the time to personally critique everyone's piece. i'm sure it must've taken a sizeable chunk out of your day.

    thank you very much!

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    ...I guess I was overlooked.

    Anyway, I hate to be a bother, but I was one of the earlier people to submit and... well.... it'd be really cool if I could still get a crit from mike on how I did in addressing the subject and heh, maybe even see how I would have stood in comparison to these guys... although that may not be a good idea thinking about it again.

    Anyway, please?
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    WOW!, thank you so much mike, i really appreciate the awesome critique, (about the reproducing..... i was wondering the same thing myself....?)

    a big CONGRADS to Anders89, i agree, your design is certainly the most resolved working with in the guide lines of "killing machine", well done!

    i'm most definitely up for the challenge next month! i'm looking forward to it, i promise to spend some more time developing an actual concept

    once again a huge thank you to MIKECORRIERO for all the great comments!
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    Thanks alot! ^_^

    Actually, the heart was a homage to one of my favorite pieces ever to be submitted on CA: Mandryk's love is mandartory

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    sorry SupaFightingRobot *feels ashamed*, and Goddamn Mike you've been a great help to us all! I will certainly take those points into concideration.





    by the way, the reason I did those stupid legs and stomach was cause I ran out of space on the page as you might be able to tell

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    Thank you Mike, I really should have put more time and thought into this. A lot more.
    New thunderdome?

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    No problem blog. In fact, because of Mike doing mine at a later time without others, I feel I got even more extensive comments which is fantastic.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MIKECORRIERO

    ArlandBattle: The entire scene is unclear and confusing, although I can kind of make it out, it makes it hard for me to determine "exactly" what is meant to be the killing machine. I see Nazi swastikas, large birds ravishing cities and people and subliminal imagery of a skull. If the birds are meant to be the killing machines, than I wouldn't consider the design to be very original. The shading could have helped to make things clearer if you kept the focus on the design of the killing machine itself through use of values and line work.
    Thanks for judging all of those Mike. You're completely right it is really unclear, I think I tried to hard to implement the concept into it's habitat, however for my entry I included a paragraph explaining what the purpose was it just never got posted by blog along with the picture and is in the other, original, teenage challenge thread. I thought it was legal to write a small paragraph giving a kind of back story to the design. I dont understand how my design is not original is it the nazi refrence? most of the other competitors in my opinion all went with the warrioresque/gladiator machine. Thanks alot for the critique; I'm not trying to offend you in anyway just trying to become a better artist.
    Im taking this in more of the form you are some high office exec. and im the freelance conceptual artist.

    And congrats Anders89

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    Thanks Mike I understand where you are coming from now, and your crit is possibly one of the best ive ever received honestly. Functionality.

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    cool, when is the next challenge happening?

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