Fast doodle as a well needed break from drawing too many silly monsters.
Ha ! You can't resist to post a doodle, finally ! Ha ! Ha ! Ha !
Just a question before I do a crit: Do you count push this one latter ? Or it's just a doodle made for fun ?
Cheers, bro !
And you're soOo right ! Done in 25 minutes ? Bastard, I love you !Originally Posted by Fellah.
And here the crit: First, something I wanna told you during this last month, but I was waiting for your new SB for writte it. I think that something change in your style and that you start to "lost" the Jean-Giraud style. "Lost" is not the good word... Arg, how can I said that ? Like a "mutation" in the way you draw. Maybe it's too early for said that, but I think that your style lost some influences for obtain some personality. That's the good point.
The bad point is... Well, is not really a bad point. But if you did it in 25 minutes, think about the way you put the values. Ho, it's good, very good... But I was thinking about something. Even if you have no backgroud, you can suggest something with a few brushstrokes, like you did on the character. even if it's just some textured brushstrokes, for dynamism. My two cents.
Anyway, it's just a doodle, I know. And a holly one, for sure !
Cheers, bro !
[P.S-EDIT] Hope it make sense, my english suck today !
elaberate, add wings, add folds on the clothing, add me begging for forgiveness at her knees, and then her slapping me, and saying "DOWN BITCH" with authority. haha! just joking, Coughs I'm serious though add me in there, nudge, nudge.
Alday.J - Good thoughts, bro! I think in most of my recent stuff it will be hard to find any Gir influence, but the doodles still give me away. The less i think about how i draw the more it shows i guess. Also it is a pretty nice way to draw fast with few details. Good crit on the bgs! I alwas let my lazyness make me leave a piece too early. I will keep it in mind and i needed to hear that - thanks, dude!
poise - hehe that might just put you on the top 5 list of the weirdst replies so far .
hey man, nice sketch,
just a crit, sometimes your faces show the same features, so the faces look the same. Maybe some faces or head studies will help.
Anyways cool sketch.
Hey bro ! It's just my two cents... Plus I told you to take care about something that I don't do in my last suff -shame on me ! Hope you're fine, working on some stuff... I prepare myself to get kickassed ! But come back quickly or Sve gonna ask me to draw some flowers [Argl ! Now I'm cursed !]Originally Posted by Fellah.
Cheers bro !
P.S @ Poise: LOL ! You're awesome !
Last edited by Alday.J; January 5th, 2006 at 08:44 PM.
Diego - cheers, mate - good crit on the features! I will keep that in mind!
Icey - i should make a doodle thread here then, hehe. Cheers!
sve - im still here, sve! Sb coming up soon! Thanks!
Alday.J - usefull two cents! Hehe, draw some flowers for sve! See you soon!
*single tear rolls down loomer's cheek*- me tooOriginally Posted by sve
nice little sketch, and although poise is fuckn' nuts(i love ya baby) she has some good points. Bring this lady all the way....she'd be in perfect contrast to your hard, dark vile monsters...soft, light, beautiful....
Your world just got much more dimensional. cheers mate
Pimpin' pencils, Batman!
Definitely make a doode thread, Fellah. Don't stop working on finished pieces, but I have to admit I, too, miss your doodles and sketches. Go, go, go!