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Ha ! You can't resist to post a doodle, finally ! Ha ! Ha ! Ha !
Just a question before I do a crit: Do you count push this one latter ? Or it's just a doodle made for fun ?
Cheers, bro !
And you're soOo right ! Done in 25 minutes ? Bastard, I love you !Originally Posted by Fellah.Oh and yeah - not posting is too boring hehe.
And here the crit: First, something I wanna told you during this last month, but I was waiting for your new SB for writte it. I think that something change in your style and that you start to "lost" the Jean-Giraud style. "Lost" is not the good word... Arg, how can I said that ? Like a "mutation" in the way you draw. Maybe it's too early for said that, but I think that your style lost some influences for obtain some personality. That's the good point.
The bad point is... Well, is not really a bad point. But if you did it in 25 minutes, think about the way you put the values. Ho, it's good, very good... But I was thinking about something. Even if you have no backgroud, you can suggest something with a few brushstrokes, like you did on the character. even if it's just some textured brushstrokes, for dynamism. My two cents.
Anyway, it's just a doodle, I know. And a holly one, for sure !
Cheers, bro !
[P.S-EDIT] Hope it make sense, my english suck today !
elaberate, add wings, add folds on the clothing, add me begging for forgiveness at her knees, and then her slapping me, and saying "DOWN BITCH" with authority. haha! just joking, Coughs I'm serious though add me in there, nudge, nudge.
Alday.J - Good thoughts, bro! I think in most of my recent stuff it will be hard to find any Gir influence, but the doodles still give me away. The less i think about how i draw the more it shows i guess. Also it is a pretty nice way to draw fast with few details. Good crit on the bgs! I alwas let my lazyness make me leave a piece too early. I will keep it in mind and i needed to hear that - thanks, dude!
poise - hehe that might just put you on the top 5 list of the weirdst replies so far .
hey man, nice sketch,
just a crit, sometimes your faces show the same features, so the faces look the same. Maybe some faces or head studies will help.
Anyways cool sketch.
Hey bro ! It's just my two cents... Plus I told you to take care about something that I don't do in my last suff -shame on me ! Hope you're fine, working on some stuff... I prepare myself to get kickassed ! But come back quickly or Sve gonna ask me to draw some flowers [Argl ! Now I'm cursed !]Originally Posted by Fellah.Alday.J - Good thoughts, bro! I think in most of my recent stuff it will be hard to find any Gir influence, but the doodles still give me away. The less i think about how i draw the more it shows i guess. Also it is a pretty nice way to draw fast with few details. Good crit on the bgs! I alwas let my lazyness make me leave a piece too early. I will keep it in mind and i needed to hear that - thanks, dude!
Cheers bro !
P.S @ Poise: LOL ! You're awesome !
Last edited by Alday.J; January 5th, 2006 at 07:44 PM.
Diego - cheers, mate - good crit on the features! I will keep that in mind!
Icey - i should make a doodle thread here then, hehe. Cheers!
sve - im still here, sve! Sb coming up soon! Thanks!
Alday.J - usefull two cents! Hehe, draw some flowers for sve! See you soon!
*single tear rolls down loomer's cheek*- me tooOriginally Posted by sveI miss you, Fellah. I like this glimmering at her dress.
nice little sketch, and although poise is fuckn' nuts(i love ya baby) she has some good points. Bring this lady all the way....she'd be in perfect contrast to your hard, dark vile monsters...soft, light, beautiful....
Your world just got much more dimensional. cheers mate
Pimpin' pencils, Batman!
Definitely make a doode thread, Fellah. Don't stop working on finished pieces, but I have to admit I, too, miss your doodles and sketches. Go, go, go!
loomer - snif, you guys are so nice! Ill be back soon - just lurking a bit Ill make a new one with a little more thought! Just so you know - the next sb is going to have a pretty evil-looking start
Aremah - hi man, very nice to hear! More than you know! Im finally starting to enjoy finishing stuff, but i will soon post alot of sketches! Thanks, man!
stop responding to peoples comments and finish this one already!
Rhaaaaa ! Fellah strikes back !!! Nice one, dude ! Finally, you can't resist, can you ? You count push that two doodles a bit further ? Or is it the calm before the storm (your new SB) ? Hope everything's fine, bro.
Alday.J - Hehe, nah i cant resist - need to start the sb soon!! Im working on a painted version of the last doodle - after my cute little dancer i really need to get back into the dark stuff Cheers, man!
Yoonjin - damn, really wish i could - but my weekend is going to be busy. Hope you guys have fun!
Ups, sorry 'stoph.
Fellah, I'm wondering how your mind works. It was a long pleasant discussion about how lovely it would be if you work more on this holy spirit, everybody behaved himself, (except poise ).everything was nice and decent. You were rambling something back too, that you agree, and you are in this with everybody. Then you proceeded to draw this totally nasty creature. Very, very playful brains you got.
Your dancer is great, I'm very grateful you did it. Sense of humour is very attractive. So please, do more. I, btw, knew that you have this in you .
And for me it was much more interesting interpretation of the theme.
Is the last drawing half traditional, half digital? or totally digital. Hard to tell already, actually, very smooth.
Looking froward to see your new book ( and promised by you paintings).
Last edited by sve; January 9th, 2006 at 08:58 PM.
Did you start a clandestine sketchbook, dude ?
sve - hehe, yeah i got a weird brain, no strukture what so ever. Like a little dog running after a butterfly, then a bee, then a funny smell, then...Glad you liked the dancer Yup, half traditional, half digital - like most of my work. Cheers!
Alday.J - haha, it would seem so
Fellah, your dancer in the red leotard, with a round belly and elegant pose is standing in front my eyes. He is unforgettable. I smile every time I see him. I'm so glad you did this image.
Like a puppy running for life seductions. Wow, who is a poet now? Very vivid image . But I don't believe it applies to you. I think you know what you want. You are in control of situation in most cases as I see it. Or I would have flowers in every post .
oh well.. it was a nice change but i guess you cant teach old dogs new tricks nice sketch tho, keep em coming!