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    hey that first one is coming along nicely!! Master's paint over seems to have helped out quite a bit. Don't worry about those lines. Nothin photoshop can't fix!! lol
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    yeah ghostlines don't really matter at all. New version looks a lot better. I like the design of the girl with the strap across her chest, weird place for one though. Cool nonetheless.

    When you do an action pose. Try to compose it with more curves and lines that aren't parallel . On your piece with the whipsword http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/Okinako/26a.jpg

    the shoulder and hip lines have the same direction and the short sword, head, chest, and pelvis all line up in a straight line. Remember that curves and opposing thrusts create eye movement, which is what you want. Look through a comic book with a lot of action in it and observe the lines for the spine, limbs, shoulder, and hip.
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    Damn, I just replied here but it's nowhere to be found

    Anyway, about http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/Okinako/28a.jpg

    The girl's left eye looks a little too big compared to her right (not much though), and you may want to increase the distance between the tip of her nose and the upper lip somewhat. I've noticed this in some of your other sketches as well.

    But nice work overall I really like your latest creative pieces, by the way. Keep 'em coming.
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    I'll be leaving for three weeks to Zimbabwe on vacation, I'll try to get one last update tomorrow but if I can't my next update will be sometime in August expect a large download.
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    enjoy Zimbabwe.
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    Aye have fun there mate.

    Loving alot of your pieces and I think its great that your pushing dynamic poses in each one keep it up mate.
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    Alrighty I'm back There's a lot its only gonna be 1/4 of what I did though, i don't feel like scanning everything. I had some random sparks, somethings are totally wrong anatomy wise, but eh I was trying to learn some new things.

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    Much, much better Oki I actually enjoy a couple in your last post.
    Great improvement and keep doing whatever you are doing.
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    I like the wireframe models, especially http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/Okinako/40a.jpg (top right). The lower right leg of the kneeling man seems a bit short to me though.

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    Love this one, very clean style (but the eyes look a bit slanted I think). Nice costumes as well, keep going
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    Thanks Wim!
    The eyes are something I practice so much because I hear they're important so i guess i'll practice them more. Costumes are fun to design, I'm getting an understanding more or less of what works and what doesn't.
    Here's the second part of my work while I was away dont mind the notes ^_^ and most of these were before what i put in the first part, so they're less skillful T_T

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    And now for some paint practice in corel painter IX
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    Yah My first figure painting in Painter IX, WIP
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    Not bad at all, that figure painting. What colors did you mix for the skin ?
    Indeed, you've come a long way with your concepts since the beginning. You didn't do all of these from mind, did you ?
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