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    Looking better all the time OKI

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    These are looking very cool. I think that if you are going to go ahead and work of gray paper, you need to get something white to work in highlights, without them it is making the pieces read as kind of flat. Very well proportioned though. Extremely inventive, keep rolling em out!

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    I agree, the pieces do have a sort of flat-ness to them, and seeing some white highlight in acrylic, gouache, charcoal etc. Would help. Your characters also tend to have a stiffness to them, but I think with more practice and more comfort, you will become more comfortable. I really like where your going, seeing that the main problem you have is elongated torsos. The character designs are awesome, the girl with fish-shoes makes me happy! Keep it up!

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    if you want to add volume, aside from highlights you can do so with cast shadows. The front foot should extend further down too. Most of the time the horizon line won't be where the feet are, so if you see it from an angle the front foot will drop down lower. keep going strong.

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    Some stuff for ya, I think my figures are improving though i'm still have some gripes with sharper angles on the body.
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    oh snap. getting some colors now. Only thing major I see is that your females need more hips. That and more lines for definition of forms and not on the silhouette. Right now you darkest lines are on the silhouette.

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    her right hand on this one is awkward looking. it would look more natural if her wrist isn't bent that much.

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    Your figures are improving immensely from your first posts. Right now you working on the right things! Keep drawing figures and draw from life whenever you get the chance. Ask people you know if they will sit still while you draw them if you have to. As you continue to practice a style will develop! At fifteen years old your definition of a beautiful woman is different than what someone older might be so just draw what you see. Your working hard and it will pay off!!

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    Thanks ^_^ I'm getting anxious to get some of these lined out properly and then maybe start painting. I might start with some prisma stuff if i can find the colors, before i go to digital.

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    YOu look like you have pretty good understanding of lighting here so I think you'll do well in painting.

    I really like the pirates piece. The costume is hot. One thing I can see is that she won't be able to lean that way with just one hand holding on to the rope. Keep on drawing man.
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    yeah I was having doubts about one arm holding the rope. Thank you very much for the paint over. I'll get on it as soon as I can.

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    Damn i guess i drew to dark the first time so you might see some ghost lines..

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