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    very good pencils!
    some paints?

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    eek, maybe I'll paint soon, me and paint have never really gotten along...me and colors altogether actually.

    Here's a little something, I'm trying to learn how to design because I have a school assignment to make a cover page for a school magazine

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    Keep the design simple for the magazine cover. Chilijapones and myself have to do this stuff all of the time for the company we work for. Go for a good graphic composition that would draw your eye to it from across the room. Then let the viewer enjoy the details after that. Keep posting!

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    the magazine cover looks good, but i think you should crack out lots of thumbnails, playing around with placement and shapes, get the basic read of it down first,
    and also what muniz said

    peace

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    heed the advice of waka and muniz. Also with your type - use three straight guidelines, a base line, x-hieght and max hieght (forgot the correct term). The x-height is the height of the "x" and the smaller letters ect.

    I like the logo. With the bird, grab some reference!

    Cool stuff none the less.

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    You got some good crit on this piece already, now don't slow down your posting, we want more stuff from you man

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    Sorry about the lack of updates, Dealing with the loss of my laptop and all my Photoshop stuff and a crapload of music and references.
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    Looks good, but slow down, fully render stuff

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    Yeah, I've been told I should do more complete stuff.

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    Sorry to hear about the laptop, It's probably a good Idea to actually push some pieces further but mainly I'd suggest to at least make sure to render out the hands and feet properly, they have a tendency to be left out ;]

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    Sorry its just everytime I start out the hands and they're not my primary focus they turn to crap. Here's a little more stuff, I was just sketching stuffs out..I couldn't get the second one to look as if she was bending forward.

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    Really like the shading on the boobies!

    Now draw more!

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    Nice boobies
    i hope it was from life ;D

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    Cartoony boredom. Sleepppyyy
    The legs are t3h suck
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    haha, awesome. I like them. some times cartoon stuff is great. I dont know if this has been adressed in the past, but I would love to see you color some of these drawings. I dont know if you have the software or not but you shoudl get it adn get at it cause you have some really nice work here.

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    Nice face studies, keep reminding yourself that the hands are important though

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    Nice tight line work. Lets see something taken further.

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    Good stuff, keep up the magic and I'll keep my eyes on your SB. Really sorry to hear about the laptop. They can be like losing a good friend.

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    Just a small little update, been inactive over the week getting ready for my birthday, which was friday. Got some cartoony stuff and a figure thing I started up..not going to well but eh. Gotta keep with it right?

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    looky there boobs in the right place and everything!
    try working on toned paper... so you don't feel the need to lay down a dark background like that
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    you might like it

    the hips are a little oddly angled for the bones to fit properly underthem

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    Nice cloth study I really like how you have shown the light. Now chuck it over another object and draw it! Cloths for everyone, id suggest a ball or something. Good work.

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    Cloth is so hard. That's a great thing to study!

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    hey you're working on cloth too! its one of my worst things to do. you've done a nice job, maybe push the valuse a little darker and lighter. more contrast. nice work.

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    New SB. breaking in with a small sketch, more later
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    Looking good Oki, keep doing those studies, very important
    I think you could also try and maybe use more contrasts in your drawings, some of them seem a bit flat as it is.
    I shall return. ,)
    Keep to it!
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    Draw the whole figure dammit! (even if just lightly) you can then work up the areas you want. If just adds that little bit extra practice (we all need) for only a small amount of effort. Its a good drawing, you seem to understand how you want the clothing, which is great considering many people struggle with cloth.

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