hey i like the feel youve achieved with your piece it has a nice mood to it. I would work on your anatomy, the arms stick out the most, it looks like you've tacked on another muscle past the shoulder, and the ball he his holding needs to show its glowing alot more than you have it to have such an intense light on his hands, and if the light is that bright it wouldnt just stop abruptly that soon, good luck, i like what you have started
it's cool, a little drab but the hair is neat and the glowing hands is a nice touch.
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