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December 29th, 2005 #1
Works by Motives [nudity inside]
Go to page 7 for latest images. Welcome!
Short introduction: I starded this sketchbook when I where 18 years old. I have always liked art and drawing but I wanted to begin in earnest, and thought it would be a great idea to post my images here, where I could get some feedback on my work.
Now I'm 21 and as far as I know I have tried to be serious about this. Ofcourse there is days when you're not in the mood of drawing but I did my best, and I'll continue that way. Im very thanksfull for all the help I can get, and I hope you will enjoy my journey thru the lovely way of art. And one more thing: A womans anatomy is the most adoreble thing in the world. Thanks.
Face made with Photoshop 7 and mouse.
as have been said it needs (much) more work on the lips (ref)
warriorgirl, made with a 0,5 pentel (HB). used reference on this one. Im pretty satisfied with this piece and
i hope i will finnish her soon.
Last edited by motives; May 4th, 2008 at 06:48 AM.
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looking good can't wait to see that warrior girl finished!
January 1st, 2006 #3
Looks like a nice start
I would say the lips of the first girl need a little work on the shadow.
January 1st, 2006 #4
Thanks for the reply guys!
Kej: Thanks, i will finnish her in the later of this week (i hope)
more to come, yes
ThomasK: Thank you!
Indeed, i will work more on the lips
January 7th, 2006 #5
Hope you guys had have a good vacation and a happy new year!
My promise for this year is too draw more. much much more
Here are some samples from my sketchpad. usually done with a HB-B2 pencil.
not too satisfied with them, but good practise.
Here i tried to smudge with my finger. not a good solution :/
some "concept" sketching. i say that the sword is mighty!
And a waterpainting
Last edited by motives; January 10th, 2006 at 12:25 PM.
January 7th, 2006 #6
show us that you are making progress
January 8th, 2006 #7
January 8th, 2006 #8
Practicing some rendering options. the first girl needs more overall shadow and her lips look odd, like she's "sniffing".
reference used. and 10-20min isn't correct. it's more like 30-40 minutes i have spended on her. pencil used: 4B
this is a outcast from the last year but newer mind, i like her anyways. definitely needs more work on her hands
Last edited by motives; January 10th, 2006 at 04:38 PM.
January 9th, 2006 #9
January 10th, 2006 #10
You have some nice sketches here. It is good that you are doing anatomy studies. Keep those up. It looks like you need some work on hands. Use your own and try drawing them in different positions. The navel on the last girl is a bit high. It should be approximately 1 head height below the level of her nipples. When shading, don't be afraid to push the values farther. The rear view of the girl has mostly midtones. Try expanding that to farther ends of the range. Keep drawing and posting. There is lots of promise here. One good thing to do is to try to crit your own stuff. When you post it, tell us what you think you did correct and what you think you did wrong. It will help you to learn to crit yourself better and how to crit other works effectively.
Whatever you do, don't look at my Sketchbook and Painting Thread!
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January 10th, 2006 #11
Thanks for the long comment hyland.
It's very informative and i really appreciate it!
oh, i didn't know that about the head. thanks for the tip!
when I study my pictures I notice that you are all right about the shadows.
what it needs is more contrast..
I think i will draw some hands today, and add some critics =)
Last edited by motives; January 10th, 2006 at 04:08 PM.
January 10th, 2006 #12
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Looks promising mate! You're doing great progress. some crits on the hands.
On the first sheet, the fingers seems to start a bit high, and seem alittle to thin, but overall nice! Also think of the flow of the curves, so you avoid the straight lines that appear just slightly on the fingers, more "organic" feeling would be good, if you loosened up a bit more maybe
The thumbs do look great overall, no big crit there. On the second piece the top of the fingers seems to have some odd shape, i cant tell what the error is, maybe just the size or proportion, but overall great work for the time you spent! Keep it up!