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    It looks cool, maybe a tiny bit more of lighting on the arms, or at least on his left one


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    I have to agree with Recursive, A bit more lighting all around this would help, right nonw its a bit confusing as to what exactley it is, but your not done anyways so you probably knew that already but overall this piece is pretty sweet.
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    When I first saw it.... I thought it was an inkblot thing. xD Then I realized it was a person. DUH!

    I don't like the background. Put it into pure black or something or give a background.I absolutely hate the current bg. >=[

    I think you should sharpen some shadows.

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    On the last picture it all looks a little too dark, although I like the idea; having just shadows define the form and highlighting. More definition would add to it as well.

    I really like the painting of the female from ref, you should keep working on that, want to see more ^^.
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    #75 does have potential..but it's way too dark right now..I know it's from the earlier sketch. I look forward to what you'll be doing to it.
    I'm drawing a blankin my sketchbook, that is

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    hey, kronos, you've got a good sketchbook going on here. i guess i don't really have anything to say that hasn't already been said, but i just wanted you to know that I'll be checkin back in here from time to time. keep up the good work man!

    chris

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    suprisingly suprised to see you here.

    hey,

    wow your stuff is really getting better and better everytime i look so i took the chance to finaly speak up, can't wait to see some more vaddi stuff when i come back, liking that lifedrawing stuff, the painter version of that latest one ended up looking a bit flat a bit bland but not bad, and yeah as some of your earlier posts suggest gavin is a awsome teacher (looking forward to being a full time pupil of his), well i will keep checking out your posts, and over the next few days i will be uploading all of my stuff, (got a new comp, so i am having to transfer all of it) but i will keep you posted, have fun and keep posting.

    Rob (that strange british guy)

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    hey man!

    glad you stopped by.... (glad you found me too)
    yeah, you'll get quite a surprise when we get back, me thinks....
    pm when you get a sketchbook up, if you can, i look forward to it

    heh.....no, no updates here, just mindless banter....
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    a tiny update, i've worked a little more on this one.... i think i'll take it further though.... at some point at least.... and some day i promise i'll stop doing all these dot, dot, dots.....

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    Nice!
    Maybe a bit of shading on her left leg (thigh) would give a bit more form.

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    I think the shoulders are a tad wide on the last one. For certain you need clearer delineation of highlights, midtones and shadows, but I'm sure those will be added. The main lightsource needs to be cleared up, it is somewhat left to speculation at the moment.
    I'll drop by later with some more feedback.
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    these are nothing special....... AT ALL! exept for the fact that it is the first time i've drawn people at a cafe

    damn people are always moving around..... but it gets you drawing pretty quick, one of them is of a waitress done in about 10 seconds

    anywayz.....
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    hey man, back again.

    i really like the guy on the left of the waitress, he has real character, quite remanicent of some kind of Charles Dickins character. i am just installing my wacom on the new computer so i am going to be a bit sketch happy over the next few days, i will have to start posting some stuff.

    keep posting and so forth

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    Nice studies Kronos. The color female is coming along especially nicely, although I think you've got her left thigh connecting to her buttocks a bit too sharply, and it's also sagging rather noticeably. Check that against reference, and then finish that bad boy!

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    Nice kronos!
    It seems that you often do big heads, for exemple, on the second page, the guy on the right. Try keeping the same scale in mind.
    Anyway, its some good studies

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