Hi there, I browsed through all your 9 pages and here's my thoughts:
- Your works seem to look best when they're involved in environmental drawings... although from what I see your main interest seems to be character and monsters. I think your art can make a great boost if you manage to put your characters fit into your environment.
- The best character/monster I see in here is that fish monster in page 5. Personally I think your char/mon looks overall rough and sketchy and can use some detail or texture in some part so the whole thing looks more...full and interesting. Your environment actually has much deeper detail and better texture, why not apply the same quality to here too?
- I can see your development and improvment on both quality and design of our char/mon throughout time, and the rock is beginning to show some of its diamond edges. My thought is that you can just try "let it go and be completely crazy" when you design - see what interesting stuff you can come up with that.
Anyhow, environment is my major weakness, I wish I can learn how to do better from looking at your work. [I need more practice.]