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    Captain America!!

    Here's cap looking all regal

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    awesome picture, I like the smoke and clouds surrounding him and the rough-rugged roofs and buildings. good anatomy and a cool chilled pose.

    the perspectives looks a bit weird, but I think they´re correct anyway.

    just thinkin bout his pants...they look very much like a pair of jeans with the seam going along his thighs. I think this what you´re going after, but I always pictured Cpt. America in spandex suit...but I guess that even a superhero must follow the unstoppable powers of fashion...hehe.

    Will you color it??! that would be soo cool to see!!
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    everything looks great , but his head seems a little small
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    I'd say the head and the hand.

    It's very cool, though.
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    nice looking pic Newbs,

    I agree with the above crits, but it still is a goodlooking piece


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    Looks nice overall...However, anatomy is off...Also, BG isometric view makes the piece look flat...Keeping his footing at zero degrees adds to the flatness...

    This piece is okay but in order to improve, do a sketch using the same scene but from another angle and with more dynamic point of view...Also, make sure to pay closer attention to anatomical proportions...
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    Nice pencils. Are you a Liefeld fan?
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    Quote Originally Posted by MrBobMarley
    Nice pencils. Are you a Liefeld fan?
    Oof! Talk about giving with one hand and taking away with the other!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elwell
    Oof! Talk about giving with one hand and taking away with the other!
    HAHA! That's like telling Orson Scott Card that you liked his latest book, didn't he write that book adaptation of Episode II?

    Yeah, some Hulkism going on with the chest and upper body. If you look at the Ultimate Cap, during WW2, he's wearing more realistic clothes like (I think) combat fatigues for the most part.

    Good start.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Elwell
    Oof! Talk about giving with one hand and taking away with the other!
    lol. well done sir.

    anyways, the perspective on him is all over the place. your ellipses on him (top of boots, belts, etc) need tweaking in terms of perspective, work on the perspective angle on his face as well.
    my point is that the camera is looking up at him because the environment and horizon line says so.
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    Pretty cool picture, though he doesn't actually look too pissed. You also forgot his scale mail. Otherwwise I can't think of any crits.
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    I like it simply because it's so damn clean... that's effin' hard to do, so nice hussle on that. Once again I got into the game a little too late to point out anything that hasn't already been talked about. But these people know what they're talking about, so listen to what they've said (except that whole Liefeld part, try to act like you never heard that name) and work with the comments and tighten this baby up into a kickass Cap pic!
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    A quick note that I think would help with the depth...your background has the exact same line width, lighting, and detailing as your foreground, which pulls it all to the front and makes Cap look like he's standing next to some model structures. Since this looks pretty well rendered, I doubt you'll go back in and tweak it; so it's just something to keep in mind later on.

    I really like your character work though, like Maruchan said, very clean
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