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    Hey Guys, I'm half way through this image in Painter and would like some constructive advice. Ta, Blue.



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    I like your coloring, I need to learn how to color...

    I don't know but your arms seem short to me. I think you should put something in the background/ top part of the picture aswell. Great job though, looks a lot better than my stuff.

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    his calves are a little too buff, and Drakdragons right in that you need to work on your foreshortening of his arms. other than that, its a nice render indeed

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    The colouring is nice and dramtic but the batman there looks a little stumpy. I think it's because the way is neck goes out diagnally like that and because of th e arms.

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    I think it's pretty cool. I think all the major anatomical errors have already been pointed out. I'd maybe just move his symbol down just a bit so we can see it a little bit more. It's clear that you have a good grasp of coloring already, nice job. I like you're take on the suit, how it almost looks like a dark blue latex or something. The red glow is also a bitchin effect, good contrast.

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    i think that we have some great crits so far. the only thing that i have to say is that it feels too blue (and blue is my favorite color so that's saying alot. my fiance has to fight me to buy stuff other colors than blue to go in our apartment). if there's red and blue light reflecting on batman himself, then the background should be reflected red and blue light, but maybe not a source of blue light like you have it now. maybe add some fog behind him that is lit, with a night sky above him, or maybe he's in a cave, or a sewer, or something, just a few ideas. but overally, good work and keep it up!

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