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    This is a concept spaceship for an old project of mine and my friends.


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    i like it. The front looks like a face to me. Like a sleeping puppy.lol

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    good start, though presentation could use some work. you need to photoshop out the vertical lines on the planet as well as the sun has too crisp of an edge. it draws the eye away from the ship which should be our focus. also adding a core shadow to the planet would go a long ways.

    easy fixes,
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    talmir,

    the model of the spaceship looks pretty good, but it's not being effected by the light sources. There should be intense light back-lighting the ship, and some softer lights hitting it on the right side from the planet. The planet should have a dark core shadow, it looks a little flat as it is now.

    Good start, though.

    check out this guy's website. http://www.nlange.com/3dmodels.htm

    he has a bunch of 3D space shuttles. This might give you some ideas on how to light it.



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    Whoops, seems like the picture isnt as finished as I first thought

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