Nice stuff, i really like your pose studies, very nice and very fluid, believable and dynamic. For the most part your anatomy seems good, but there are a few issues on some of the pieces, so double check or use a reference. The major thing I see on the larger drawings is that your anatomy is falling off the center line, for example, the abdomen is falling off the center line of the chest and the neck. It's happening in a few of the pieces, not all of them. You got some nice designs as well. Keep up the good work.
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†Phenomenal drawings! really loving the gestures, really feel the motion in some of the poses, wicked looking creatures! Keep up the great work
hmm I'm liking the guestures and creatures and muscles. I can't ever remember which muscle goes where. You've got some good stuff here!
@Smitherines: thanks!yeah i see what you mean about the center line...still got some problems with anatomy...
@Darklord101:no problem!now i see how this whole SB business work... about the gesture, guess motion and dynamism was what i was looking for!...i love wicked looking creatures!
@Omi-kun:thanks! well, about muscle location...lol, actually i don't know them either i don't normaly do drawings with reference, althought i know i should...it just..."comes naturally"
thx again everyone...hope i'll be able to post soon again!
Killer sketchbook, love the imagination works! Got a great sense of design in your characters.
Freshen up on anatomy and such though, with a bit more structure the characters willl be unstoppable!
more stuff, went to a picnic with some friends yesterday, and instead of drawing children playing with kites, i drew this (damn me can't i bloody draw something NICE sometime?! )
Crazy stuff man!
I like your creativity, especially in your recent character designs.
You should give them more value and more shadows, that would really make them stand out!.
Thanks for your nice comment and tips, think im gonna speedpaint enviro's soon.
Perhaps your right that my nickname is wrong, but that kinda makes it ironic hehe
now let's see.Since you mentioned all the various problems in anatomy, i guess i should start getting something serious done (dunno how much this will last though ).Got some cool tuts, gnomon stuff, hogart and lomis and Vilppu books, so in the next weeks i'll try to do some serious studies too.Just started with some noses (don't really wanna go back to total basics again, i gotta fill some "leaks" first)
hmmm im not sure if its from reference our your mind insisting on seeing most of that guy's left eye, but i think at that angle, its either he has a really small nose or you've shrunk it so that you can draw more of that left eye in. great studies man and great creature concepts! I think those studies will really refine your design sense! Lets see more!
thanks for the comments btw!
Hummm really not bad! I think you could make really great works! Probably this sketchbook is a little too much rough, try to put more time to details and to finish some sketch, maybe to use a "Gum-pencil" (I am not sure of the english name) can help you.
Your concepts and ideas are very interesting, but all them seem to be like unfinished... well, I know that it's a sketchbook and not a finished section, but I think that you could improve your skill more. Naturally you could add other subjects to your sketchbook: real life sketchs, buildings, vehicles, environments and so on.
I liked much the one with all noses... you could it something so with hands too!
Well... continue to post, guy!
PS: Io sto praticamente esportando la pasta qui, non saro' perfetto come cuoco pero' mi difendo! ahahahahahah ciao, Modenese!
@thegreypencil: mmm you're damn right about that nose and eye, but i'm already hating that head enought, i'm sure i can do better thx for the comments.About the studies, i hope they help, that's the whole point!
i know what you mean about the "unfinished" look, other people on this and other forums already mentioned this...guess you love it or hate it
anyway i already have the tool you mentioned , that kind of pencil-shaped-eraser, don't know the english name either
I don't actually have much time to finish anything, the most "finished drawing" you can see here is the one n post 96 (thas how "clean" i can get )
i'll try to vary the subjects sometimes
more stuff from today...
Realy great updates, specially like that one.
i guess everybody loves Bob da Sailor
thx for coming back once in a while, i'll make sure i return the favor
Yeppers, Bob rocks! Goota love the anchor tat.
Really nice concepts here man, I really like teh ginat near teh top of this page. I think the samurai character would look better standing in a horse stance or leaning the other way to make the piece more dynamic.
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