Hey there, thanks for stopping by my book. I just looked over your stuff and want to say, "Wow! Cool!" You've got some great concept designs going on here and you're expressing them well - I especially love that digital white hooded guy with the tongue, that's crazy to look at.
What I was noticing mainly - and it was in earlier posts, so you may have corrected this - is that in large scenes with many characters/buildings you tend to lose a sense of depth. I realize this is linework, so you wouldn't rely on value to establish space, but I think you could work to get a better sense of volume and hold the characters fit in it. That landscape study has that, compared to this city scene, where it took me a while to consiously separate the characters from each other to see who was in front/behind and interacting with whom.
Again, great stuff, I look forward to seeing more!
you mean in the comic or in the rest of the stuff? because the X guy will be this muscular!
if you are talking about the rest of the stuff, well you are right, i should try different shapes and constitutions...i think i'll draw something fat and something thin soon
been looking through your stuff and is retty cool and expressive, but imo lacks a bit in variety, it seems the theme of troll and knight is a frequently reoccurring one within your work. Maybe give it a shot and try some vehicles or landscapes maybe? keep em coming.
man dude, love your journey since november, fuck dude, I'll keep my eye on you. My strongest crit to give you is to becareful with your proportions and to add lots of flow and dynamics, your painting is getting alot better. Also, Do you use the pen pressure in photoshop?