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    Cool Pinup

    Hello Friends,

    Holy Cow... my second post in as many weeks... hopefully it's habit-forming. Pretty straight-forward pin up girl... Hope you like it.



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    That seems like an unnaturally harsh start to her rib cage below her left arm. The left arm itself has the feel of being pasted on: It's not anchored correctly at the shoulder. Her breast is really large, even for a pinup girl.
    Oh...and give her some fingernails!

    The beachball is really well done and I think the reflection works.
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    Her left hand is really awkward and the pinky finger is a little nub. And her bikini bottom looks painted on where it rides up her ass, maybe some wrinkles in the cloth would remedie it this does have promise though.
    Strange coincidence that every man whose skull has been opened had a brain.
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