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    I'm very glad to hear that, Gloominati. Thank you

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    ~30-45 min, PS


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    Very nice! My only problems are that the distant buildings look too much like blurry lines, and the water seems almost like a mirror. I'm not sure what you could do to change the water though.

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    hi andorz, looks great! I really like the mood in this piece

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    Thank you vey much! I was starting to dislike this piece, but you made me change my mind, hehe :d

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    I really dig this last piece! Sweet! Definitely try and play up your edge control a little more. Also try playing with the lights on the buildings a little more. Lastly, is the water supposed to be flowing in the river? I would either put some indications of froth and foam along the edges and the pier to give more of an indication of movement, or change the direction you distorted the buildings in to line up a little more with the horizon line and less with the direction of the river. Hopefully you're going to work this one up some more!

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    Thank you bdFoster
    I'm not gonna work more on this one, but i will most likely make another one like it. Thanks for all the good tips!

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    I think the foreground isn't defined enough in the top one. The buildings look kind of fuzzy. As for the bottom, everything looks fuzzy

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    in both the top and bottem you might need to try and keep the tone level of the buildings at the same strength of the possition in picture, mmm like.. the far away buldings in the top pic could blend more with the background paleness behind them. you hit this well in the mid pic of the three
    which i like alot, has the building of a nice atmosphere
    bottem pic - more detail pls ! ;D

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    One reason that river pic might look mirror-like is it seems to be reflecting a sky much brighter than it is. Just tone it down so it's "reflecting" what's really there and it won't stand out as much.

    I love the mood on these, it reminds me of of a PS brush I put together once that was awesome for fleshing out city lights in the background with only a few strokes. I wonder if I've still go it somewhere...

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    Thanks for all the tips!

    Selfportrait


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    nice portrait. way to mix different media too.

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    Thanks Incolorinred



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    Naked guy is really creepy. I think his rear upper arm is too short though. Keep up the good work!

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    Thanks number 6. The shoulder of the rear arm is supposed to be like pulled upwards, behind the head.


    A caricature-portrait of me


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    Haha, I like it. It could use some cleaning up though.

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    Finally scanned some new shit:















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    Your enviros are seem to be you strongest field.
    The human subjects look good. But study more. Looking at the eyes of the 5th pic. Remember the structure and how the eyelid behaves on the eyeball as it gets closer to the corners.
    Anyway, just keep drawing and you'll do good

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    Thank you very much!

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    he andorz,

    like the nice big update, got some really nice things in it keep up the good work!

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    The eyes on the portrait look kind of flat. Don't forget that the eyelids stick out from the eye a bit. The building in three-point perspective at the top looks like it curves in a little bit for some reason. Keep it up!

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    yeah man there is some really nice new stuff goin on here, great imagination, dude .
    Give us some more, I wanna see what's inside your Brain, dude!!

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    Thank you very much guys! Your comments make me really happy ^^

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    Critics are appriciated ^^

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    I think the hand could use a little more definition (and attention to finger width), and the nose seems to twist to the side.

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    speedy:


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    I think you need to work on perspective/foreshortening. The guy's arms and hands look too big while his leg seems shriveled.

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