Hi, I'm doing excersises like this one to practice illustration. Not really finished, but I feel half way stuck. Its inspired by the deep sea c.o.w.
Some things on it I like, other I don't, but I can't really say what... I think it may be too overall dark and not enough lighted areas... also maybe the color choices are off. My idea was to use cold lights/warm shadows for the guy, warm lights/cold shadows for the girl. I don't know if I'm achieving this, or if its even a good idea.
Also the compostion looks boring now that I look at it... maybe I should have brought one charachter closer to the viewer. I don't know.
Please, if you can take the time to give me some crits on this, I would greatly appreciate it.