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    Mountain Lion

    Hi

    That's a mountain lion, a traditional work with ink and crayons,
    the background based on an photo.
    All things i optimized in photoshop. I think it took ca 7 hours.

    The puma a steel skelleton and his claws are blades...
    Hope you like it

    Mountain Lion

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    you definitely need to do more reference on the lion. also, the sky looks very filter-ish...like you just did a posterize in photoshop. the foreground perspective is really wonky and hard to understand in relation to the lion.


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    I agree with apollo you really need to work on a number of things, you need to get pictures of lions to reference as far as anatomy goes. also study perspective.

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    I agree with above comments ... & ur background looks like a different style to ur lion creature IMO.

    The shadow underneath the lion seems a bit dodgy in my eyes.

    That rock background is maybe bit strenuous on the eyes .

    Just IMO

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    Please redo the background to match with your lion's texture.

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