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    The punishment

    This is a piece I painted for another website contest.
    I hope you like it.

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    There isn't much faulty in it, but personally i dont like it much. Maybe its the positioning, or the characters, or the proportions, i dunno, just don't like it much.

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    nice colors man.keep up the good work i want to see more.

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    i like the creatures and the dude on the floor i dont like the woman.. her legs are super long and the color you chose for her hair is too close to her skin tone.. i would have given her black hair... also, its bunched up together too much.. looks like a wad of chocolate.. also,, that creature looks pretty strong he should be pulling her more and she should be struggling to hold it back... but, the action and perspective are really good... good luck with the contest

    Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd

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    in addition to vigostar's comments

    the only crit i really have is the goblet in front w/ the red cheerios...kinda confusing what it is and the perspective on the elipse is off or the stem is off...something. it needs redrawn

    otherwise, great execution
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    The guy on the floor needs to be where the goblet is -

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    The back edge of the knocked-over 'goblet' is larger than the front. Adjusting that should fix the perspective. I think the smoldering cinders turned out good (not cheerioish to me.)
    I think if the woman's leg was thicker, and she had on a heeled shoe, this would make that area look more natural. I'd pet sit for her any day.
    Fun composition.

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    Red face

    Hm, for my taste the coloration looks too smooth and "computerized"/digital.
    I prefere more textured work. I'm no big fan of the figurestyle...I think I agree to Fl3wk-sorry
    But that's just personal taste...
    Solid work

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