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    Her face seems a bit smushed other than that it looks prety decent to me you might want to move the 5 dollars down near the date and make the 9pm and $5 more llegible.

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    Thanks for the feedback, does it not read that she's leaning back?
    Anyways I agree with the moving the $5 ,,,maybe a bolder 9pm too. Thx again.

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    Any other thoughts?

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    Maybe you should make that fang a little bigger, she's not exactly screaming 'vampire.' I like it, though.

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    haha yeah, she's wisphering vampire. LOL
    I know exactly what you mean, I added it through PS, maybe I should re-paint then reattach instead of trying to photoshop it on the web-size it's at then....

    Thanks for the tipage. That's why I come here....

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    no, it does read that she's leaning back, its just that all her facial features aren't leaning back at quite the same time. Her jaw may be a bit wide as well, as though her vampire wisdom teeth have just been removed

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    I'm not registering 'vampire' at all.. I initially thought the tooth was a shading bit for her lip. Hollow the tooth out a bit more.. that should make it more obvious. Might not hurt to add a couple of 'glisten' dots of white to the blood trail either.

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    Thanks everyone for the feedback. I will see what I can do with it......

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    The basic design of the girl is good, but with a few changes needed.
    You can barely see the fangs, so 'vampire' doesn't come to mind when you see her.
    I would open her mouth a bit, move the blood trickles to the corners of her mouth, and make the fangs bigger.
    Making the blood RED instead of BLACK it would help a lot. Black squiggles look almost like her hair.

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    I thought about doing red, but it's gotta be B&W. I added blood high-lights and some hair across the "wide" jaw. Think that helps.
    The idea of an open mouth is good, though..... I will mess with it, we'll see what happens.

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