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Thanks for the feedback, does it not read that she's leaning back?
Anyways I agree with the moving the $5 ,,,maybe a bolder 9pm too. Thx again.
Any other thoughts?
haha yeah, she's wisphering vampire. LOL
I know exactly what you mean, I added it through PS, maybe I should re-paint then reattach instead of trying to photoshop it on the web-size it's at then....
Thanks for the tipage. That's why I come here....
no, it does read that she's leaning back, its just that all her facial features aren't leaning back at quite the same time. Her jaw may be a bit wide as well, as though her vampire wisdom teeth have just been removed
Thanks everyone for the feedback. I will see what I can do with it......
The basic design of the girl is good, but with a few changes needed.
You can barely see the fangs, so 'vampire' doesn't come to mind when you see her.
I would open her mouth a bit, move the blood trickles to the corners of her mouth, and make the fangs bigger.
Making the blood RED instead of BLACK it would help a lot. Black squiggles look almost like her hair.
I thought about doing red, but it's gotta be B&W. I added blood high-lights and some hair across the "wide" jaw. Think that helps.
The idea of an open mouth is good, though..... I will mess with it, we'll see what happens.