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October 8th, 2005 #1
Strange "golem" concept
Hello, i been kinda free latelly so i used somne of my time to train myself into creating more stuff for my portfolio , of cource is easyer if you keep a bunch of pictures in the same context, so i made the context and i got a little carried away. Long story short, im developing the entire concept, wish is quite a lot, here are the first ones finished:
I hope i got them right , Thanks for your time in advance
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October 8th, 2005 #3
The wasp one doesn't fit in.
Some of these are compelling beyond belief. I SO want to know the story behind them and their creation as golems...but a few are more the alien/robotic creature or game opponent, particularly towards the end.
You might consider compiling 25-30 or so into a book, each with it's own title and description...
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October 8th, 2005 #4
the fat purple one is really cool. The wooden samurai is okay also. But the other two? Just not selling it. Golems, I thought, were these immense walking fortress-like constructs with thick bodies. Uhm... I don't have much other crit for you, with this art style it's kind of hard to tell you "what you're doign 'wrong'".
Edit: Actually, the wasp and the round crab thing with the green eyes are really good too. I particularly like the wasp because it sells the feeling of weight with all the chunky parts, but it looks really magical because it's held together invisibly. (sorry madster. I can't see what you do , I guess.)
Last edited by Threshold; October 8th, 2005 at 10:47 PM. Reason: missed three pictures
October 9th, 2005 #5
AmmishCommy: Thanks a lot , you put a big smile on my face.
Madster: Yup yup, i know what you mean, the reason of this differences between them is because i created some sort of different factions based in other cultures within the concept world, making first a good representation of each faction.
For that matter each golem is created in a different way, the world concept haves different natures based on elements ( tipical, but i did my homework about it and created a nice element circle to go with it). Most characters are based on "fay", and the forms,function, construction and faction are based on this characters. here are some short explanation of each:
The wooden warrion, based on Bokwus, some kind of "ent" that draws to his home the spirits of people that have drowned; I looked some graffical reepresentations of this fay, but all i could find was some sort of leafless wilow, of cource i needed a cliche strong forest protector, and make him absorb water magic because of the original characteristic the mythic bokwus haves.
Second one is based in Bendith y mamau "fay", wish is supose to be really ugly and swaps her´s ugly children for pretty human ones, despite that, she protects and takes really good care of the human baby, so i reepresented that concept with a big armor and a smaller one as magic caster......uis the ticical heavy strong one protecting the powerfull weak one concept.
The dog looking one is based on Barguest, a Bogie spirit that shapeshift to a shaggy dog with horns, i didnt liked the idea of having a dog with horns, because is useless if you think in practical tems, so i reepresented only the dog part, and instead of horns i `placed something a little more effective and agressive, like an hatchet type blade in his forehead.
The wasp looking one is based on the fay "Asrai", this one looked like a typical faery, but her characteristic was that she fades in water, so i though in prisms to make that possible, so this one could reflect light sometimes by coating itself, making itself invisible, or creating mirages and copys of itslef, and also use the prisms to shoot light rays, etc
The weird one with green eyes is based in an Antropophegi, is supose to be a human eater spirit that haves no head, no nose, but his mouth and eyes are in his torso;
The one with the big head and shinny blades wasnt based in anything, i was trying to make the cliche magical type ( cliches are nessesary sometimes)
And the last one is based on a Hag called Corrigan, i dont know mcuh about this particular character exapt for the fact that is a hag that prettends to be beautyfull first, so i just kept the name and make something almos unrelated to the concept only because i failed to acomplish the concept i wanted
This Golems are made by different magical creatures, some more magical, some more technological ( in a fantasy steam machine kind of way); Aslo some will look forged like empty armors, mobile totems,etc...
I already have around 40 "Golem" concepts sketched with their unique function, description, habilitys and backround, so ill try to make my explanations more solid as i finish and post the rest.
Threshold: Thanks .
BTW, im just using the most basic concept of golem, wish is to craft something innanimate without life to place under the crafter service, The big stone golem concept, despite is the most popular, is just one way to put it. The big golem protectors are from the Jewish mythology, but similar concepts exist in other mythologys using different names or materials, so im just using the diccionary term of golem to enclose them all in the concept world.
Thank you all, ill make some more and post them in here
October 9th, 2005 #6
These are really fun designs. If these are for your portfolio, I'd suggest finishing them up a bit more to balance out the softness and sometimes low-res look that they have with some crisper edges in a few focal areas. The thing that bothers me the most about these is that the backgrounds look like they were slapped on with a quick choppy swipe of an airbrush. Also, why not ground the characters to their backgrounds? This is sort of happening on the 2 with reddish bkgs but only a little. Again, great designs!
October 10th, 2005 #7
Your art is so sweet, man. These are wonderful, thanks for sharing them. My personal favorite is the second one, I just love how you used highlights.
October 10th, 2005 #8
This looks like the art from one of those card games, like duel masters or something.
Anyway, I love these. My favorite is definetly 3 and 4. I don't really have any crits. Just thought I'd pop in with my opinion.
October 10th, 2005 #9
I'm rather busy these days trying to get some jobs worked out, and getting my own personal work done. However, I thought I would just give a quick suggestion:
Backgrounds- if they were less saturated in color and had some interesting designs/textures or minor details the characters would Pop out and become much more interesting. I think the backgrounds right now are detracting from the focuz of the characters/creatures. You also have to know when to "break" some rules especially in these kind of situations where your utilizing the background light to bring focus and contrast to your characters. A good example of this is wherever your characters lightest side is...you should have darker colors in the background around that area..and the opposite for the shadow areas of your character; being brighter in the background.
October 10th, 2005 #10
Deschaps :Thank you, that was quite ussefull, im grounding the older ones and fix some issues, some detail seem like made from plastilina.
Damster : , thanks a lot, you pumped out my confidence a lot.
StealthNachos : Yes, i though about making a character presentation similar to that one, glad you noticed.
MIKECORRIERO :Thanks you for your time, ill take that into consideration for the rest, still learning about that, mostly i make a lot of mystakes with characters and backround, so for now ill folow the rules untill i nail them completly, ill apply your suggestion to the next bunch of characters, im sure you are 120% right about this
Here are some edits, fixing some details, addin some other plus 2 new ones, also some characters are not longer floating in their backround ( unless they intend to float)
Thanks for your support and sorry for not replying later, i had to do some spring cleaning in my house XD.
October 10th, 2005 #11
Very interesting concept.
I love them all.
Other than that.. I have nothing else to say.
Nothing to critic.
But Mikecorriero have a good point about the backgrounds.
Though, since it's for your portfolio, you might want to refine them more.
The only example I have is with the dog-like one. The lower part of the blade on his head could use some more work, very minor though. The coloring seems a bit quick. On the higher part of it, the color isn't recovering completely and in the lower part, we can see some brush lines. As for his shadow on the ground.
Very minor things though, but I thought you may want to heard it anyway.
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These are badass! Some crits though, as stated before, refine the blade on the dogs head, The way it tapperes in at the end grant the illusion that it's bending dramatically to perspetive along with being curved, which sort of throws off the perspective for me. Try to either widen the end of it a bit, or take some shine off, which is also serving to make it seem like it's curved out further into the light than should be.
Plant the dog, he seems to be floating, give him a stronger immediate cast shadow. Same goes for the metroid/exoskelliton/violet looking alien(also, add some better highlights to the fingers of the arm closer to us since, at the moment, they seem to be receding considerably further back into space when compared with the knee with it's massive shine.
The gramps/woods/teal figure also need a better explained shadow, looks like it's floating. Underneath the main body even though the underbelly is pure pitch black. the ground doesn't really reflect the fact all too well.
Alright, too tired, have to go to bed and get up early for zi schooool
The academy... *sigh* what a harsh mistress.
Excellent work man, I love the flare and refreshing originality.
October 11th, 2005 #13
wow these are really awesome. I love the designs fro them,really interesting and origional. As for crits, I cant really think of anything besides making them pop out of their backgrounds, for example if the golem's main color is blue, you dont want the golem to have a blueish background, you want him to completely pop out.
Last edited by Eytan; October 12th, 2005 at 12:37 AM.