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    Interceptor's House of Bacon --- August 21st UPDATE. Eklispe Duo WIP ---



    Something to start off the sketchbook for my SSG

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    yeah cool......i dig the landscape in the first pic...the pink linework makes me feel like i'm going blind...but seeing as how i draw in red i should probably just shut the hell up....

    post more...post more...
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    Don't know why but that first one is doing some odd stretch thing. I can't view it correctly. Love the line work on the second post I see a lot of McFarlane influence in your style. Maybe just the way the noses are done and your line quality.

    Good stuff.

    And now for nit picking crit of the week. The boy in the second post looks consistent except for the nose. The stylization on the first panel would suggest a smaller nose but in the next panel his nose is rather big and square.
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    Yay! Jean Lucs got a sketchbook! Looking forward to seeing more Loren! Some of the works on your website aren't showing up, but that could be a twitchy Firefox I 'spose...
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    Jammy!
    The first pic crys for colours! Are you able to paint with Wacom or sth like that?
    You Pics are so professional, that u MUST show us some coloured ones! plzz

    Hope you show some more!
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    Lovely stuff, very clean! Good line weight! Though on the first one i think you should have varied it a bit more in the far distance. The depth scrambles a bit.
    Nice stylistic rendering, Really looking forward to more
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    Awesomeness fantasy drawing, very comic like. Great use of lineweight and lots of cool subtle details. Can't wait to see some studies and more characters!
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    Lawd, your line quality is jus lovely. I really want to figure out how people manage to make such nice thick and thins so clean.

    http://www.deicomics.com/images/gatery30.jpg
    This is sweet. The *only* thing I think it needs is jus some application of value to help seperate foreground, middleground, and background. Right now my eye has no idea where to go in the composition.
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    love the style ; ) im gonna keep on eye on this thread. post more!
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    arg the pinkness, tis making my eyes go all blurry. but its still a nice drawing
    couple of things though, the line-weight on the upper body of the boy(i think its a boy?) is great, but the lower body blends right into the backround and it's hard to tell whats going on.
    You might also want to add some different details to the boys glove, It looks almost like an oversized hand, and the details you did add give the impression of fingernails.
    I think you might of also used a bit to thick of a line to make some of the plants down in the canyon, It makes them seem overly large and almost a bit too cartoonish.
    The last thing I noticed was that the clouds seem to blend into the backround, adding some cloudish details will make them pop a bit more and make them more, uhm, cloudy?

    Sorry for picking out tiny insignifigant details to crit
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    Royal T - I'm regretting drawing it in pink, lol. Because I want to color onto the board with markers and watercolors... but I think that...just maybe the pink will clash with everything, hehehe. and it's a very effeminate boy.

    bengonzalez you're quite correct. I should study my characters a bit more before committing to actual drawings of them.

    poshspice I'm afraid I'll have to get on my webgirl about that. I'll write it in my Captain's log

    chr!z Thanks, man! I do have a wacom tablet, but I want to try coloring that one with traditional mediums. So be sure to give me a huge when I come cryign about how I screwed up.

    badger I see what you mean now that I look at it. I have problems with looking at individual items rather than the picture as a whole. I'll be sure to keep this in mind!

    Danomight thanks alot!!! I actually have a study of this character that I need to get scanned very soon here!!

    redFIVE you know.. I was thinking about just jumping in and coloring it. but your values comment has made me decide to do some black and white light studies in PS first. thanks, man

    MrCrowpsey I'll try not to disappoint!!

    snowsfall unfortunately it's already been inked! But I'll have to try to emphasis the fact that it's all glove when I color it. thaks for the advice!!
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    Here these go.. after accidentally posting them in the lounge under someone else's thread.. yeesh.

    I fixed the problem of HIS left ear being too high, and too close to his ear. And the fact that the ears are a different size. It still needs more work. Then I'll get a good scan of it, so you can see the whole body. it's on a 15 x 20 board.

    Interceptor's House of Bacon --- August 21st UPDATE. Eklispe Duo WIP ---

    I never do fanart really.. but for some reason I was compelled to do a few of these sketches

    Interceptor's House of Bacon --- August 21st UPDATE. Eklispe Duo WIP ---

    I wish I could fix this up. but I lost the drawing

    Interceptor's House of Bacon --- August 21st UPDATE. Eklispe Duo WIP ---

    this is a bit older... still on the old pink lead kick

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    a sketch of my best bud sitting on a patio bar

    Interceptor's House of Bacon --- August 21st UPDATE. Eklispe Duo WIP ---

    random ladies

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