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    A personal piece. It would be great to hear what you think.


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    Monster is great, but girl body need more work. Also bg should get more deepness.

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    Her head appears to be at a slightly different angle than the rest of her body which causes her to look like she's almost falling over. Also her face dosnt spell out mistery to me.. more of a surprised look.. "Dude, where's my top??" kind of look...

    I'd rework her head.. other than that. I like it alot.

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    hey kari,
    you are great with monsters... as always!
    the girl needs some work though.
    i think you should try to make her a little more dominant.
    i took the liberty of doing a paint-over.
    ( its just easier to explain )
    click here: PAINT-OVER

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    hey dude I really like it! one weird anatomical thing I noticed is that his left shoulder (our right) the pec muscle overlaps the shoulder muscle. I think its supposed to work the other way around with the shoulder muscle overlapping the pec.

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    Thank you for the good critique It looks like everyone has similar observations, and I agree. Thanks for the paint over Dan, it's definitely helpful!

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    The toplessness seems a little out of place and forced. If she were completely nude I would buy it, if she had some sort if filmy dress on I'd buy it, but now I'm just wondering why she's only half dressed.


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    From the expression on her face, so is she...

    This piece is static and flat, from the background to the creature's overly long fingers, to the half-dressed babe with the confused look on her face.

    What are you trying to illustrate with this?
    Did you make any thumbnails for composition, or did you just "jump right in?"

    This is a WIP at best, but depending on your plans for it, it may yet be a serious piece...

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    it think that the monster's chest is too flat. I know that it's your artistic freedom but it would look much nicer if he had some depth, or lungs

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