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September 23rd, 2005 #1
My Sketched Up Creations
Hello everyone! This the first time I've showcases anything on this site. I wanted to see what kind of improvements I can do on my drawings. Please, feel free to comment and critique.
Last edited by noiion; January 3rd, 2006 at 01:05 AM.
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you need to get your images up to a proper site so we can see them.. there all linked back to CA for some reason.
Try using http://www.photobucket.com
Then copy the picture adress and put them into the IMG tags like uve done there..
Hope tht helps
September 23rd, 2005 #3
Sorry about the technical difficulties. Thanks a lot, Andy.
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Well... I think that your lines are looking good, but for some reason, the un-armoured man's proportions don't look correct compared to the armoured men. But the female drawings look perfect, so it looks like you allready know all that. I really don't know what else to say..'cause I don't know enough about anatomy n' perspective to crit..lol.. but I can say that you need to work on the hand of the first girl on the left, in the last image there. I think It's lacking perspective or somthing! hehe
I hope I helped..even just a bit
September 23rd, 2005 #5
Hey some nice stuff going on.
In terms of improvement - apart from the usual 'draw more, practice anatomy blah' try and aim to get your basic proportions and perspective correct generally. ie some of your side on profiles have the legs on the same 'plane' when the back leg should be higher than the foreleg due to perspective.
Try and vary your line weight to pop out features and areas - especially those closest to the viewer.
Start to use tonal value and shading instead of lines to create muscle masses
Try and get away from the 'anime' look until you have developed some grounding and let's see some more stuff
September 26th, 2005 #6
My next phase.
Hey everyone, thanks a lot for your critiques. I really appreciate them. Here are some more work that I have done. The mercenary is my latest. The rest are just older drawings that I liked. As Always comments and critiques are always appreciated.
Last edited by noiion; September 26th, 2005 at 03:44 PM.
September 26th, 2005 #7
I like your action poses, especially of the girl coming forward towards us. With the girl who's twisting her back to look at us, hand going out to the sides at 45 degree angles (damnit, she's the one in the middle), I think if you would make her hair twist around her form as well it would really make it come alive. I like the merc, great pose, but he needs a bigger gun. We all need bigger guns.
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September 28th, 2005 #8
Thanks a lot for the comment Books. I went ahead and changed the gun up. It's a bit longer, though not bigger. Otherwise I'll have to go with machineguns and throw bulletlinks around him. Which isn't a bad idea!!
September 28th, 2005 #9
Draw more from reallife, even u don't like to hear it ^^
Your Poses looks really dynamic. Your style is a little bit like Lovelocks.
C: The legs of The Orcsoldier looks strange.
I hope this pic helps ;D
September 28th, 2005 #10
3 models Face Off!
Chr!z- Thanks for the comments. I'll see if I can fix him later.
Err -That Fat Kid- Sorry don't really know your name . No you didn't piss me off. I need the critiques. Thanks. You're right I did draw the gun last. Guess I should draw the gun first then I can position the hands right.
Any ways here's my next batch. 3 models facing off to see who's the pretiest. The first one was my attempt at some really hard details on a face, using a refernce. Guess I went way over my head. I would put up a poll but I don't think it's necesssarry. You decide.
September 28th, 2005 #11
Interesting stuff...sorta vaguely reminds me of fantasy cartoons from the 80's, like He-Man. Work on the faces a bit more, but looking good there.
September 30th, 2005 #12
Thanks for the C&C guys.
Quinster: I've made some changes to the last girls face and have started a coclor WIP thread with her. Please check it out and see if it works.
Fat Kid: Well Except for the old lady, the other 2 girls were done from my head. Well 98% of them at least. I had to look up somes leg positions for the last girl. The one I found was covered in a dress but I figured it out. Even though I was happy with her, there are still issues I need to fix.
October 2nd, 2005 #13
Good work here Noiio. Iwould suggest working your anatomy. It will bring some great realism to you characters and also help with the proportions(a problem i often have). I find it good to start with a rough sketch and then fill in the details. That way you can workout any conflicts with the scene or character before you put in all the work on detail. Just my two cents. Keep up the good work.
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