Updated: 2 new versions, the 3rd version is the final one.
A piece that I really love, this is finished, and comments are welcomed. Do you like it? Yes or no. If yes why, if no, why not?
UPDATE!!! Here, after all of your tips, is my new version, Thanks so much you guys for the tips, I think it looks a lot better, and I kind of subdued some of the colors too, I don't know if that helped or not, but I like it. Are there still tangencies? Or did I get rid of most of them?
Okay last update on this, I think I got it right this time, if not, alas, I feel this if truely and finally finished.