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    Smile Bunnies Love Carrots : UPDATED

    Bunnies Love Carrots : UPDATED

    Updated: 2 new versions, the 3rd version is the final one.


    A piece that I really love, this is finished, and comments are welcomed. Do you like it? Yes or no. If yes why, if no, why not?

    UPDATE!!! Here, after all of your tips, is my new version, Thanks so much you guys for the tips, I think it looks a lot better, and I kind of subdued some of the colors too, I don't know if that helped or not, but I like it. Are there still tangencies? Or did I get rid of most of them?

    Bunnies Love Carrots : UPDATED

    Okay last update on this, I think I got it right this time, if not, alas, I feel this if truely and finally finished.
    Bunnies Love Carrots : UPDATED

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    Maaaan I nearly went blind because of these laser-colours! To be honest: I don't like it. But I think with this kind of artwork it's really a matter of taste, so no offend.

    Keep on keepin' on!

    cheers!

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    Yeah, it is a matter of taste. But you're entitled to your opinion. So thanks for the comment anyways, it's supposed to be uber cutesy stylin' and seeing as I like bright colors, well, yeah. That's all

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    i think this belongs in the photography section. where noone will see it.

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    that wasnt nice bluepuppy.... I think the major problem with this specific artwork is that its huge... and being that its a vector illo its even harder to see what your trying to convey... shrink it down.. maybe we can get a better sense of what your trying to acheive!

    Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd

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    Quote Originally Posted by thebluepuppy
    i think this belongs in the photography section. where noone will see it.
    Wow what wonderful way to make a new member feel welcomed. Kudo's to you.

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    It's a miracle! I can see! I can see!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yodaah
    It's a miracle! I can see! I can see!
    lol haha. is it better now that I shrank it and you aren't assulted by brilliantly bright colors when you first see it?

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    I like it a lot.

    Good job.
    Carrot background is subtle, but it's there.

    And the bunny is cute. Anyway, post some more :3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Squidittch
    lol haha. is it better now that I shrank it and you aren't assulted by brilliantly bright colors when you first see it?
    I still don't like these colours, but apparently viggostar was right, it's better know ("I can see clearly now..."). But I prefer your snow creature (also wrote a comment on this).

    Glad to have you here anyway. The world would be a sad place if every piece of artwork would fit every one's taste.

    cheers!

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    well, actually me likes

    But take more time to think about composition...the bunny's head and the wavy background makes a tangent...move the head slightly to the right, this way you will have also the golden section...same goes for the bubble with the carrot on the left...move it up about 20-30 px...

    kick the green stars, they have no meaning, unfitting colors and are confusing the viewer also detracting from the focus points...

    give the pic a white border of 20 px, scale it up to 640x480 and there ya go

    The border matches to the ecard/cute looking, also generates a nice effect of the bunny's head coming out of a white border, since the head is white itself...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yodaah

    Glad to have you here anyway. The world would be a sad place if every piece of artwork would fit every one's taste.

    cheers!

    Too true, very wise words. I'm glad there are people out there who, while you may not like my choice of colors, are still polite, and helpful. I appriciate it muchly.

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    this and your moon piece are very competent pieces.
    nicely done.

    pictorially, they don't hold my interest very long...
    but they seem perfect for packaging illustration.
    very quick reads & eye-catching colors.

    if you haven't already, package design, and textile design might be a good field for you to look into.

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