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Thread: At the roots
September 16th, 2005 #1
At the roots
C & C welcomed.
September 16th, 2005 #2
The value of the green makes it too innoculous...
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September 17th, 2005 #3
Nice root network. I like the feel of it like looking out of a dark cave. On the bottom right there is a lot of ambiguous detail, It's not well defined and It doesn't show what's going on. I want to see what's down in that corner because the composition of the piece pushes the eye towards it. Then it leave it hanging by not providing enough detail. I know the focal point is the green sprout but it's too light and hard to see as it is.
September 17th, 2005 #4
OK. I will keep working on the bottom.
I think I keep having problems with the greens, perhaps I do have enough greens variety, I will work on that.