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    Pahlein Marauder

    taken image for revision. thanks

    Last edited by Escelce; September 16th, 2005 at 09:49 PM.
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    I like the beast but...

    is it CG? I generally notice that things seem to be very stiff and inconsistant when its a "paint over cg model"..but I may be way off - let us know

    Beast
    - The feet meet right at the edge of the page which makes it feel very claustrophobic. Also, add some more at the top...

    - I'ts legs need to be modeled more; lighting is very flat

    - The tongue looks bad - take it out altogether

    - The thing around the beast's neck doesn't feel like its sittin on on the neck. The saddle doesnt look like its wrapping around - bad texturing

    Character
    -Even though its a skeleton - it looks very stiff and the way it's sitting is awkward. Direction of the legs?

    -Are the horns supposed to be symmetrical? If not, they aren't different enough to see if it was done on purpose


    Other
    - The BG needs an indication of something - its just too plain right now and it's so soft that it makes the textured beast look "pasted on".

    - Where are the stakes coming from the other side? Is he holding them? it doesn't make sense.

    Hope that helps

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