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    Entropy - update [8 - 08 - 2006]

    Last edited by Metaborg; August 8th, 2006 at 11:34 AM.
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    Very beautiful, I must say. Personally I think the lines on the cheek look a bit exaggerated, but other that that spot on. It has a very dreamy, watery effect.

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    Nice technique, but you are falling in the same problem that many people fall at this forum. Composition. I come from a graphic / web design background and that's something im very strict with. It see too many open spaces where the eye wander without any purpose at all. Unless this is a book cover or something very specific, is not working. But I have good news, I think that if you crop this document at the right place it may make a huge difference. The compossition is very conservative too, very much at the center. I invite you to make a couple of copies with different crop layouts and see for yourself. Maybe you'll end up liking it!!

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    only crit i have is the nostrils look a bit off like they arent the same shape
    other than that a fantastic job

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    I won't be to critical, but the hollowed out eyes really creep me out.

    I guess as a child I always thought things without eyes were the ones that were the most evil.. lol..

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    Thanks for c&c.
    Another mix of digital and acrylic painting to the series below.





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    woah, that's VERY nice man. congrats! these are going to the inspiration folder...

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