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    Finnegan Warriors

    Hope you like my pic." Finnegan " in old irish means light skined. Maybe it's not the right title for my pic but... . Please feel free to kill me and tell me what do you think.
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    very impressive dude...i like the dark look.

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    very nice work

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    I like it a lot but find the textures a little overpowering, in many places the textures appear stronger than the form of the objects.

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    textures look good but, you have the same ones everywhere even in the forground... also many parts look flat... especially the cylinder towers... and I would do without the people... they make the painting flatter... get some more contrast and value wher the sun dont shine.... brighten up areas that should be illuminated more... ledges should protrude a tad.. therefore leaving a dark space underneath.... and the rocks that are used as building blocks shouldnt look uniformed... get some ref. and see what old castles look likle.. of just watch braveheart or king arthur or something like that... you'll get it!

    Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd

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    Yhe foreground seems a bit flat and shallow compared to the background. Composition is good, and the overall image is impressive. I would recommend making the foreground more vivid, and tone down some of the detail and textures in the background.

    Good stuff.

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    I think you could do without the people on the left side of the painting. The cylinders right now look like rectangles with slightly rounded tops. Also is the tower in the middle supposed to like it protudes then rounds? People look out of place without the same texture work as the rest of the picture.

    Sweet textures..YEAH!!

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    its a great piece with good detail but my only crit is that the mountains dont seem right, they are too smooth to be cracked, when a mountain or a cliff or whatever that is is cracked the edges and the surface shud be more rough and rigid with pointy edges, but other than that good work

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    thank's to all of you for your replys.

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