Results 1 to 15 of 33
September 5th, 2005 #1
.:A little "Welcome" in Star Wars style:.
I'M a newbie. And I WILL be greatfull for every opinion here.
These are some Char's I've made for my Star Wars d20 campagin:
I saw that my pic's vanished for some time!!!
Happily, I was able to fix this.
Glance at them, and dont forget to look at my .:locked'lines:. sketch book..!
Loads of my stuff there...
Last edited by Lovelock; September 14th, 2005 at 07:19 PM. Reason: My pics just... VANISHED!!?
Hide this ad by registering as a memberSeptember 6th, 2005 #2
Nice work. The technique is quite good, and the texturing isn't bad either. However, this isn't really in the style of the Star Wars universe. Nothing wrong with that, but don't advertise it as something it's not. Just something to consider.
Also, the lightsabers are bugging me. Sorry to put it bluntly, but they look like white sticks with red coloring around them. "Real" lightsabers would not show up at all against a white background, because they are a light source and you cannot brighten pure white. Never allow the lightsaber to darken any pixels.
Lookin' good, though. Keep up the good work!
September 6th, 2005 #3
You are of course right. "...this isn't really in the style of the Star Wars universe"
I just used wrong words, but I understand what You mean.
(My campagin runs far into the future of the Galaxy, over 1500years After Battle of Endor. Star Wars After I call it. And there is really something different about this age... )
September 6th, 2005 #4
September 6th, 2005 #5
I kinda like them.
Sure right, they don't look very "Star-Warsy" (does this kind of word actually exist in the english tongue?) but I'd say they fit quite well the look of the prequels rather than the design of Ralph McQuarrie. And the look reminds me even more of the animated series and the sketchbook for jedis and siths of episodes I-III.
Looks cool and fits very well that character of the "Old Republic-Theme based Pen&Paper D20 Role Playing Game".
But I'd love to join a rpg directed by a game master that draws out his imagination that good. If he can tell stories as good as that that campaign will rock.
I don't like the new d20 system, I'm a member of that old d6 system from West End Games. It's the same thing with the prequels - don't like em - so I stick the god old stuff... but thats leading too far...
Keep up the good work! Looks really cewl. Loved to see some Headhunters or smugglers from you.
That's just my opinion.
September 6th, 2005 #6
Thank You all!
Boom: I kinda dig these quite a lot. Very nice.
I have no idea how one would bent light to achive a scimitar look to ones lightsaber, but hey.. it's futuristic, right?
Hey, please do not be sarcastic..!
In the official storyline of Star Wars there really WAS a Jedi Master that was using a lightkatana.
I'm not telling this is smart, but... Hey, do not search for logic in Star Wars, OK..?
Hey, that campagin IS rocking..!
And as soon, as I translate it to ENG I'l post it on some SW site.
September 6th, 2005 #7
Wow, who do I see here!
Lovelock's back on the nets..
Well.. you know.. i like and dig you'r stuff.
WANT MORE ofcourse..
The only thing missing are details I like in you'r sketches..
throw some here - make Rootlin happy"War is the realm of danger; therefore courage is the soldier's first reqirement."
Carl von Clausevitz "On War".
Rootlin's INK-LINE ARCHIVE : http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?p=599070
September 6th, 2005 #8
About these pics here..
first the best - i love it ,
last... something's wrong with it lovelock.
September 6th, 2005 #9
Ok im going to be completly honest here:
1- The position is lose, well designed clothing, the weapon fits the personality you want to show, but.......The neck is misplaced, and the chest´s perspective looks odd ( maybe because of the neck, im not talking about how long it it, cause it is quite long andyou probably meant for it to be like that, but requeck the placement in the upper body, or just notice how the shoulders look, also the green eye is kinda off, and the white iris is also to far off
2-Well acomplished character
3- It looks nice, but it haves the same neck problems ( remmember im talking mainly about position)
4- To be honest, you need to check the entire anatomy on this one, the arms are to short, the pose is strange, the face needs work and the the torso needs to be revised in terms of proportion..
September 6th, 2005 #10
Thanks for the tips! It really helps to find holes in craft...
1 - Got the "neck problem". I find it now in many of my pix'z. Fixin' it.
Bout' the chest: I wanted to make her look "shorty", but the head is really too big, and the limbs too short. Now it makes me think, she looks like she is a dwarf..
2 - Darth Niod. He was first..
3 - Got it.
4 - When i finished it i was surprised. "Where is her right leg?" I asked myself... But I'm working with next sketch of her, cause she's my favourite character.
Last edited by Lovelock; September 10th, 2005 at 06:18 PM.
September 6th, 2005 #11
It is good. I'm a big fan of Star Wars, and I don't recall ever seeing a cat like race...correct me if I'm wrong, actually I'm not a "Big" fan....just a fan.Japan+Canada=Japanada.
September 7th, 2005 #12
Well... I'm not a SW specialist but as far as I know there are 2 cat-like races in SW world..
September 8th, 2005 #13
Yes, I'm here, so be prepared for kickin' a**
oh well...I'll let you live...soon my stuf will be here....yea!!!!
anyway you know I like it, I prefer sketches though....
want to see something new...won't be happy to see something I already saw
so work hard..there's nothing better than a good drawing for breakfast!!!
KampfHase...gotta tell you, Lovelock tells great stories...if he want's to
September 8th, 2005 #14
What I like in your posts is that you use watercolors to design your characters. Not many use that in the age of computer-coloring, so it´s cool.
My suggestion: They seem to be a little bit static, why don´t you give them more dynamic poses ....or did you want to focus on the cloths?
It´s nice to have another Blame-fan around
Maybe that´s what the others meant by "they don´t look very staw-war-ish". I think the anime-styled faces don´t fit very well with what most think of, when they hear "Star Wars".
September 8th, 2005 #15
There are no members to list at the moment.
By Art_Addict in forum SketchbooksReplies: 105Last Post: March 26th, 2010, 03:43 PM
By relic180 in forum REFERENCES & INSPIRATIONSReplies: 4Last Post: May 4th, 2009, 12:37 AM
By WRELM in forum 3D ART, SCULPTURE ART & TOY ARTReplies: 3Last Post: December 11th, 2007, 05:58 AM
By defcombeta in forum FINISHED ART & ARTWORKReplies: 8Last Post: October 7th, 2006, 03:57 AM
By DARKWATER in forum FINISHED ART & ARTWORKReplies: 65Last Post: July 4th, 2005, 02:47 PM