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    My second commision

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    Who woulds thunk it that girls like drawing of them ond there boyfriends.
    This is a rough sketch of were I'm going on this one I wanna know what you think seems off in the face more than anything.
    I personally think that her head seems to be squashed A little, and her mouth may be a bit to big. tell me what ya think

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    I think you missed the shape of the guy's eyes. They are more like trapozoids, and his eye sockets seem a bit more shallow.

    Eyes are the key to getting a good likeness down.

    Don't just practice. Also Practice the right things, the right way.
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    seems to me.... that the guys forehead is larger then what u have drawn.

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