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    Arrow Aerial Acrobatics

    Something I did for fun. It's some sort of futuristic stealth fighter performing stunts. Several people have said that the ground is too disturbing, others have thought it fine. What I'm wondering is whether or not I should crop the bottom to only show the clouds or leave it as is.
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    It DOES look like he's about to crash into the ground. Only clouds might suggest there's more space left between him and that awfully hard ground.

    Crop it with Photoshop and see what effect it has. Never hurts to try.

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    have you a bigger pic?

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    Its too straight down as it is now. Move the clouds and ground higher up so the plane is in front of it and give it some turns and twists! Its a nice painting, but a little bit boring as it is right now. Give it some action.

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