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August 18th, 2005 #1
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well,the girl's proportions are very,very odd. plus her torso looks quite flat.and i think her right hand has six fingers.
i like the colour choices though, but perhaps her hair is too similar too the value of her cloth.
August 18th, 2005 #3
I would have to agree that the girl's proportions are odd. She feels stiff, and not dynamic.
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August 18th, 2005 #4
Yep! The six-fingered female warrior. It does look like her lats/rib cage is missing, but that should be a pretty easy fix. The dragons and background look great.
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I like the painting, but as my peers have noted the porportions are really odd, which brings down the entire image. It's a cool start though. The glowing vagina is throwing me off.
August 18th, 2005 #6
yup. im going with the other peeps on this one... hmmm... interesting... but, those dragons look great!
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August 18th, 2005 #7
damn I love this, only problem I see is her vagina
August 18th, 2005 #8
i really love the colours and background, its a shame the anatomy kinda fell apart on this. i think it should be salvagable though.
her shins are extremely long, and her thighs are very short. the hips and lower stomach are really messed up, and not making sense. her chest seems to be ok...
her arms are extremely short, but i understand they are supposed to be behind her. the perspective of the arms needs to be fixed. the extra finger is odd of course.
i like her face, how it is angeled up in a defient kinda way. and it is rendered nicely.
i do hope you go back and fix these anatomy issues, it would be wonderfull to get the entire image up to the same level as say the background.
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August 18th, 2005 #9
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Either she has some serious hip displacement issues, or the largest ass ever.
August 18th, 2005 #11
The dragons are great. The figure is well painted (outside of her her glowing crotch), but, as has been mentioned, there are some serious anatomy issues. Her arms are much too short, her neck isn't centered on her shoulders, and the angle of her hips isn't reflected in her legs. Her feet are also way big.
I know it's too late to work on this any further, but here's a quick sketch to show what I'm talking about for next time.
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August 19th, 2005 #12
great colors, great hair, great dragons, great cape....but very strange looking pose, you have to fix that, it's to distracting.
also, the dragons are so large I would have liked to have seen the rest of their bodies. now they read as floating heads.
August 19th, 2005 #13Originally Posted by Elwell
WOW! Can I send you all my drawings!
August 19th, 2005 #14Originally Posted by ParkerD
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