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    hey CA, i'm 19 and i'll be studying architecture since october the 1st..
    here's some of my dudlez and random sketches and drawings. as soon as i'll be scannin' some new stuff, i'll be postin'.

    moses

    moses again

    traditional home in my area

    little boy doodle

    and a little girl doodle as well

    car doodle

    that's it for now.. i hope to do some scanning tomorow..

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    damn, sweet drawings man... i especially like the first one, great study.

    I don't pray because I don't want God to know where I'm at.
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    I really like the first one! Godlike facial features.

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    There are a few subtle details you should fix to really strenghen the sketches. Sometimes the eyes glass over things like that, so it's totally okay if you missed them.

    The first sketch is very nicely executed, and I love the fade into sketchy area. What bothers me is the heavy outlines around the bottom.Edges also reflect light, as I'm sure you know. You should just use a light pencil line. It's probably too late to change that now, but I'm sure you'll find it more realistic.

    Your second sketch is also excelent. The reflection on the floor is very well done. But the lines on the walls behind the face are very messy, and makes it very hard to concentrate on the face. The way those lines curve down makes it seem as though the wall also curves outward. In which case, the top edge of the wall would be different. You should've also shaded in the opposite direction in the darker wall. It's just BETTER that way. Lol.. I don't know the reasoning fbehind that one, never argued over it before. Last thing i wanna say is the bottom corner of the two walls, is WAY too dark. Even if there wasn't any reflective lighting on the floor, you should add it in to balance the picture.

    Anyways, just like... 3 things? But they could really improve your work...

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    heh.. thanks for the feedback, those are like the only drawings i had scanned or photographed (i meen the only noticeable ones). i'll be scanning some drawings i did last night so you can see my improvement(i hope)

    sodomizer thanx..love that one myself too
    optix thanx.. been trying to mess around with "polygonal" stuff, trying to figure out some main volumes..
    2100 thanks for the feedback dude, you're right about what you said, i've been said to be a bit messy some time ago but i hope to get a better use of my hand in future drawings.. about the first one, you're right, but i kept the strong edges in order 2 mentain the rough aspect. and the second one, well... true, the wall just sux and kind of destroys the drawing.. indeed, it is late to change them now, but i'll be sure to take care of that aspect in future drawings. thanks alot! cheers!

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    these are sketches from my sketchbook, i did them last night...
    i will say it from the begining to avoid any discussions: there are drawings here inspired by wes. i drew them in order to learn, they are learning sketches which i hope you will enjoy.

    first crap in my sketchbook

    eye study

    wes inspired

    wes inspired

    some from "the mummy"--photo ref.

    wonder what the ref was on this

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    A firebat? I recognize the "BIG" and the two headlights on the marine or something..

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    I think the 'Star' followed by Craft, is a dead giveaway.

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    it should be enough of a clue
    i used to be huge fan of starcrat..many nights were spent through endless lan's

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    I never caught on to the whole starcraft faze. I suppose that by the time I bought it, everyone was so good online that I was destroyed in 5 minutes.

    Anyway, I recognized that to be from Starcraft even before I saw the... 'hint'.

    You are a really talented artist.

    Keep 'em coming!

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    10x dude...will do. in a week or so
    hope not to be spamming then

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    You have some really nice sketches. I especially like the Mummy one. You have a telent for detail aswell.

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    thank you for your positive replies.
    i really would appreciate some rough criticism, rough enough to get me going even harder.. so please, try to reply with constructive, detailed critics. thank you.

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    On the ape, his face seems to slag off on the left side of the pic. It's too fat and it gets lower and lower.

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    No Way!

    noway man . you have to study drawing at least 7 more years and only then you can show it to someone . i`m absolutely seriouse . Take my advise: don`t listen all that stupid fucks , just f`ckng learn , learn like crazy , draw everywhere , all the time , 24 hours a day - and then you will get somethig . may be .

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    I am Shocked and Apalled

    Wait a minute, What the fuck!?

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