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    Some unfinished sketches, check it out!...No really check it out I need more replies!

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    The redering and detail is superb, but the last three people look sort of off balance, especially the fighter. I actually studied karate for a while back and I can tell you he would have fallen over if he stood like that, try getting some references of fighters in dynamic poses. The military guys look like they just need placed a little better. The one on the left(crouching with the RPG) should probably be rotated clockwise a few degrees, and the soldiers leaning on the pole should just be slid to the left on the pole a little bit. I like them all though, just some minor tweaks. Oh, and is that a warthog from Halo?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mavrick71
    The redering and detail is superb, but the last three people look sort of off balance, especially the fighter. I actually studied karate for a while back and I can tell you he would have fallen over if he stood like that, try getting some references of fighters in dynamic poses. The military guys look like they just need placed a little better. The one on the left(crouching with the RPG) should probably be rotated clockwise a few degrees, and the soldiers leaning on the pole should just be slid to the left on the pole a little bit. I like them all though, just some minor tweaks. Oh, and is that a warthog from Halo?
    thanks for the comments and yes that is the warthog from halo

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    As a general comment, you seem to short-change your figures in the leg department. Some of the posees, too, seem stiff or unbalanced. There seems to be very little spine motion, which may be contributing to that. One of the things that would help (seeing as your karate guy seems to have the best anatomy), would be to draw the figures out prior to clothing them. Not bad, overall though.

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