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    a few things i did

    the dragon thing is on line paper because i was visiting my aunt and thats all she had


    didnt finish this one because i figure it would just make it worse






    harsh crits welcome, please no vague crits

    one more


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    Some very interesting lines, Adam!
    I like the last two the best, but you have a tendency to make arms a bit long and a bit too thin, proportion-wise.

    The armor on the second one is very interesting, but the head is too skinny, overall. I think this one should be redone, and then "fleshed out" more. I'd like to see how you could do the arms to fit this breastplate.

    The third piece, of the armored guy leaning forward has too small of a chest, which, combined with the lines of the arm shields, and his leaning forward pose, make him look, well...odd.

    The mouth of the sea creature is too small. I think it would look better, perhaps if you showed what kind of teeth it has. I'm envisioning lots of tiny, shredding type teeth, perhaps in circular rows inside the mouth. This would make a nice piece if you added some sort of undersea background for it.


    The strange wizard is my favorite, but again, the arms look too skinny and long in proportion. Also, his hat seems too small for his head, although I like the style (Marie's recent revelation about dragons secretly hoarding fancy hats has me currently fixated on the darn things...Thanks, Marie!!! ).
    Any of these could be fleshed out a bit with shadows for depth, and more details, as they all look a bit flat right now.

    Good efforts, overall.

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    the last one is suposed to have like a shot gun coming out of the sleave. ya and i do tend to do that with the arms and i make legs to skiny and short. im going to add a few more tonight and might redo the last guy and the fish if time permits. when i made the last coment i had you in mind due to you are harsh(some times) but always right.

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    Funny, Adam, I thought you might have been talking to me...lol!
    Thanks for the support.

    I'm looking forward to that fish piece!

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