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    nymph of the blue(updated)-2nd of August-

    hi all,i finally completed this piece last nite,i've been painting this piece on and off con currently with my other works,this piece is very much inspired by one of the work did by Jason Chan,my 1st attemp in undersea painting
    here it goes,i name it the nymph of the blue
    nymph of the blue(updated)-2nd of August-
    comments are welcome and enjoy~
    Last edited by michael see; August 2nd, 2005 at 03:37 AM.
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    Wow... great pic. I might be biased to a hot girl in blue *ahem*

    If you pulled my leg to critique i would just say her breasts seem too high.. not by much but just a lil. otherwise.. wow great piece. Wish it was desktop size.
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    Its really good, however there's a problem with the legs. I suppose you're trying to say that she broke apart from her legs and that's why they dont align, but it took me a minute of looking to figure that out. Initially I thought the legs just were misplaced. Also much of the bottom seems unneccesary, if you cropped it a bit it'd make everything tighter and(imo) a bit better.
    PS I disagree about the breasts, she's floating in the water so they're right where they should be.

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    lord blue - thanks alot for the comment,its very much appreciated.i'll see what i can do about the breast

    ryanwh - thanks u very much for the comments as well,hmm,for the legs u mentioned,is around the waist part or the thigh?i'll try to figure it out thoughand i'll see how the composition goes when i do the croping for the image.thanks again
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    Quote Originally Posted by ryanwh
    Its really good, however there's a problem with the legs. I suppose you're trying to say that she broke apart from her legs and that's why they dont align, but it took me a minute of looking to figure that out. Initially I thought the legs just were misplaced. Also much of the bottom seems unneccesary, if you cropped it a bit it'd make everything tighter and(imo) a bit better.
    PS I disagree about the breasts, she's floating in the water so they're right where they should be.

    LOL real breasts don't float
    deprived me of my coil

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    I think that brests are not the problem, but the shoulder wich is extremly pulled back.
    Great pic, anyway

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    It's is beuatiful. Did you paint this traditionally?

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    Quote Originally Posted by beyond_the_forest
    LOL real breasts don't float
    I can't be bothered to explain how you're wrong. Rest assured you are though. Fish dont "float" either, but they still look like they do.

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    I think what Ranwyh is stating is that breasts wont sag as much in the water due to the weightlessnes.

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    The left shoulder looks a little disloacated or something, but it's still nice. I liek the motion of the water, you've shown that particularly well.

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    sweet idea. i woud take the little bit of legs that you show out.

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    i've updated the painting due to the comments u guys have given

    danilo and bluemech - hey thanks alot,here i've made the changes on the shoulder due to the comments given
    madman - thanks mate,i 1st sketched this in pencil then scan in and did the color rendering in photoshop.
    ryanwh and nutter- lol still going with the breast floating issue,anyway,i've tweaked alil bit on her breast
    cthomp - thanks,yeah u were right, here in the new version,i've revealed more of her legsthanks again for the comments as well as the compliments
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    this is so good ^_^

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    I have to admit at first I was just like "Boobies"!

    After more looking I realized that the way the neck is craned towards the body doesn't seem right. That and her right side (our left) isn't correct. I think it comes out a little too far and her right shoulder is too long.

    Nice piece though! I like the color and the face.
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    looks nice. great technique and rendering style. is this strictly done in pshop or did you add some painter flavor to it as well?

    great stuff!!

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