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    nice mood. A little dark, but I think the main problem is that the atmoshperics and depth for the background aren't working quite properly. It has a very flattened look.

    Might also want to try for more contrasts next time.

    However, I really like the figure, and the simple composition is working well.
    Interesting palette too.

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    I'm inclined to want a little more definition with the main character. Try to seperate him from the background a little bit; I think that's where a little bit of sharper definition would help. The sketchy slightly out of focus background is fine with me but try to think of this along the lines of how depth of field works with photography. Put the main focus on what you want us to see first.

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    i know you did this on the computer, but i would swear looking at it, that it was oils on board or canvas... maybe that's just how little i know about painter though...

    love the background...

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    the drawing on the figure is superb.

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