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    Been a while since I posted or browsed in CA, been busy and all.
    Now I need some C&C on this WIP here, I know there's a foreshortening issue in the right elbow but I can't quite put my finger on it, I think the biceps is too long.
    Any other comments are appreciated as well.

    Tis good to be back.

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    I don't think the arm is too bad, but perhaps it could be a bit more like this:

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    I think the forearm just needs to be raised a bit.

    But it's a wonderful start and I can't wait to see it finished.

    [Credit to Avison Stock for the photo.]

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    im really liking your skin tones here. great concept, too. i would, however, revise the throan, as at the moment she doesnt appear to be sitting on it, but instead sort of.. leaning? i dunno, it just looks a little off there. id like to see her more on centre, cause at the moment shes a little too far to the left (our left). keep going im looking forward to the final!

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    Thumbs up

    That is one cool looking outfit. Definitely looking forward to the final product.

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    Thanks for the feedback, I'll update later today.
    The throne will be revised as soon as I start painting it.

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    yeah, the right upper arm is too long - that's messing your foreshortening up.
    If she's supposed to be sitting, you'd probably have to bring her left knee up some and foreshorten it because she does indeed look as if she's leaning against it, not sitting on it.

    Nice image though so far.

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