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July 15th, 2005 #1
Lomg time since my last post...
Lets see if this can get some comments..
Did about 50/50 at work, and at home.
Exclusively done with a blue ballpoint pen.
My favourite tool it seems.
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First off, wow. I get so messed up using pens and drawing.
Only crit- the composition. With the empty on the left and the main chunk of art on the right, it gives the impression that the beserker isn't so much charging, but is being pushed or falling. Not exactly fear-inspiring. :X
But very nice nonetheless
July 17th, 2005 #3
Thanks alot for the comment.
Yeah, I can actually see what you mean. I'll keep that in mind next time I do something with a pen.
It's just hard to correct something done in pen.
July 17th, 2005 #4
dude its badass, i can feel the power.
it is very greek/roman and reminds me of god of war.
the composition is acceptable, and in fact unique and not boring.
dude i would be honored if u posted in my horror art forum
July 17th, 2005 #5Originally Posted by manslauter
Perhaps when i'm done with some new drawings.
I'll bookmark the forum for now.
July 20th, 2005 #6
wtf? It got moved?
There's a reason why I posted it in the finished section.... It's because it's goddamn finished!!!
Whats up with that kind of absolute bullsh*t?
July 20th, 2005 #7
Because it's ONLY a ballpoint pen sketch!
Like, what part of "Finalized and Well Presented" do you NOT understand?
Just 'cause you finished drawing on it, does NOT qualify this as a "Finished" work! It's a very overworked sketch, and nothing more.
Get over your ego.
You want it in FF? Then put forth the effort. It'll show, just like this shows that it DOESN'T belong there.
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July 20th, 2005 #8
Nice work, I like the detail and all those cross hatching. The muscles look really good too. The blank wall really bothers me, if you don't have the border around to suggest it's a wall behind him, it may not bother me as much. But then since i know it is a wall, it feels too empty. Give more cracks and dirt and smudges on that wall, it might help to balance the composition too.
Don't get so upset with the moving. It's a really good work, but it still needs more polishing. (I blame that on the empty wall). All in all, I hope to see you calm down and work on it a little more.
July 20th, 2005 #9
Its a very nice drawing dude, but i kinda understand the moving. I do a lot of drawings that i feel are finished, but that i would never put in the finished section. I mean, a ballpoint pen drawing next to a fully rendered Poshspice chick or a poster of a 1000 SPs from Android. I dont have the balls for that, you had and got burned. I guess you should clean it up a bit, color it or play with it very tastefully in Ps or something. Give it a lot of thought before posting it there. I like it - its good - but the hard white space and the unfinished hands make it look sketchy.
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July 20th, 2005 #10Originally Posted by lordofhjoerring
Try to work hard to make your work acceptable in that new version of "is finally finished".
BTW, is a really nice drawing...the Axe´s position looks a little weird...maybe you could enhance this pic in photoshop, it would be a shame to leave it as it is ( it haves more potential than that)
July 20th, 2005 #11Originally Posted by madster
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July 20th, 2005 #12Originally Posted by Ssenkrah Semaj
July 20th, 2005 #13Originally Posted by Fellah.
Thanks for all the comments everybody. You're right about the moving, I just got a little upset thats all, no hard feelings.
About the wall thing. The white space was never intended to be anything more, than just some white space. I see what you mean now, although I didn't see it initially.
The axe's position is a little weird yeah, but I'm not sure how to correct it. Ballpoint is pretty permanent, so corrections can be hard to do.
Thanks for the encouraging comments. I don't think i'll go any further with this one. I'm pretty caught up with another ballpoint drawing at the moment, and so far, I feel that this new one has a lot more potential than the one I've posted here.
I'll post it as soon as i've got a little further in the process. And I'll post it in this section ofcourse. (This section is much cooler anyhow, people tend to comment a lot more here it seems).