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    Electric!! All over again.

    Hey guys, here's a pic i just re-did, i posted it before and got some good crits. Thanks too all the people that gave me crits. Hopefully this will be a better piece than before. Crits are welcome. PS 7

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    I like bg. Maybe same simplicity in foreground

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    Danilo- thanks for the comments.

    Why was this moved to the sketches section? It's a finished piece.

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    It may be "complete," but it isn't considered "finished," i.e. "Presentation Quality."
    *The background is poorly rendered, with large, visible strokes.
    *The "outer glow" on the forearm and the eye area are inconsistent and splotchy.
    *The "eyes" of the zombies are really badly painted blobs of white.
    *The "foreground" red is poorly rendered, large strokes of inconsistent color, representing neither a red fog, heat, or any other object, other than just fill-in painting.

    The name of the place is Concept Art. When Concept Art is "Finished," it's professional quality of skill level, regardless of looseness of style.

    Don't take it so personally. You're not the first misguided soul, and you probably won't be the last.

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    madster- it's suppose too be a speed painting, it's suppose to get an idea across. The rough look of it, it's there for a reason.

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    madster- it's suppose too be a speed painting, it's suppose to get an idea across. The rough look of it, it's there for a reason. I wasn't aiming at a perefectly rendered pic.

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    From what I've gathered if you are not a professional (other people don't see your speedpaintings as finished) then you're not allowed to post them in the finished section.

    Plus you're still looking for comments on how to make it better. You said so yourself. I wouldn't take it personally if I where you. I would just move on take the comments that are given and learn from them.

    It's a nice pice but the foreground fig seems very rigid, the draping of the cloak needs to be reconsidered (maybe some drapes and fold studies), and the painting needs more control. The paint needs to find a consistent direction, in the background right now the strokes seem to be attempting to keep a consistent diagonal but they slant more in some areas.

    I like the pice and hope to see more from you.

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    There is lot of unecesery tangling here.

    If you have been moved, means that moderators dont think that your work have enough quality to stay in finaly finished section.

    Maybe you think that it has but you are not moderator.

    Moderators are people chosen from administrators for theirs artistic levels or experience in industry.

    If you searching for democracy, no one stops you to make your own forum.


    Tell me if Im wrong.

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    bengonzalez- thanks for the crits. I am not taking it personally, i was just wondering, i'm totally fine with it. Thanks again guys.
    We're all here too learn from eachother.

    Danilo- your right, i don't have anything against being moved. like i said, i was just wondering.

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    anatomyyyyyy and clotthhh studies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111o ne

    it was moved because the anatomy is retarded and the cloth looks like cardboard. get a ref and fix it.

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    Be polite!

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    waronmars-i saw your work and i think your the one that needs help with anatomy.

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    If you're going to be an asshole when someone gives you a crit, you might as well just leave now. That's what the site is for. Waronmars was harsh, but right. Stop worrying about her work and worry about your own.



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