Hmm... I have a little problem with crits - I don't really have much about anyone to ask them from. I've been on devart, gaiaonline and asked my friends, but the problem is that I don't get enough crits, usually not at all. Then I ate my words about not posting here until I'm enough good.
So any crits that comes into your mind, would be really appreciated.
This picture is done as 60x100 cm, so the lines look crappy...
As what comes to commenting, you can draw over the picture if you wish. Also - the sketchy lines are my style, in case you're wondering why they aren't that clean and visible. Everything else that looks bad is a mistake.
Here's the sketch:
And here's the start of the coloring:
I think I atleast have to re-draw her left hand, form the sheet on the leg better and change the skin color?
Also I was wondering, if the sheet on the legs are good? And... should I draw the hair again?
Thank you for listening and checking out this thread.
(Also! The background sketch was made by Ara and I took a little referance on the back of my own and my mothers. )