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    Icon Steam Punk Concepts

    Hi, this is my first post. Everybodys work here is so good, im a little anxious. Ok, so this is what im working on right now, steam punk type concepts. my concepts are slowly getting darker as i progress with them. I know about punctuation and the spelling errors but tell me all you can. thanks, im honored
    -Cormac
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    Last edited by Cormac; July 14th, 2005 at 06:27 PM.
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    here's my newest one so far


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    hoo hoo hoo crazily cool concept! i really like it!

    the layout and design is very poor though. Your grammatical and layout errors are overbearing and distract from what the text has to say. CHoose a better font, turn hyphenation off, fix spelling and grammar and do something about that grid background, its a little overpowering.

    The image itself is really nice, i llve the poise of her hand and dress meeting.

    I liked the part in your description about her falling and getting back up to come closer - it reminds me of that movie Thirteen Ghosts with the Jackal - that woman one tapped inside a metal cage on her head.

    Keep it up man, ill keep an eye on your thread!

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    thanks Form, im going to get to work on my words first, ill need to get someone to look over my grammer mostly and spelling. im also going to make it a little bigger at least 11/8.5 . the background and layout is ment to look like a blue print draft of sorts but i'll look at other ways to give the idea without being so over powering.

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    give me your words, ill lend you my ears!

    i do some proofing and editing in my spare time, id be happy to give all your writing a run through on this, and future pieces.

    as for the grid, lighten it up and make the boxes half the size (so doubling the fineness of the mesh). this will bring it to a more uniform colour with less contrast and wont distract too much.

    cheers.
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    Just what i finished today
    May Fly


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    Awesome!

    This is really great! Totally love it!

    Som man bäddar får man ligga.
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    interesting concepts. has a graphic design feel to it. for the girl, i would agree with form, the background is a tad distracting. keep going.

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    ups, well that's the new Ann up top, i accidently saved over the old pic so i dont have anything to compare it with, basicly I got rid of the back ground. Form helped me out allot by cleaning up the text. I enlarged the whole pic a bit also.
    -Mac

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    New one, Cogenstein and Barnacles these are all actually going backwards from when they where done in my note book, im just adding them as i udate them
    -Mac




    Last edited by Cormac; July 13th, 2005 at 11:26 PM.
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    Spec Ops Umbrella


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    sadly i lost the original file forthis concept, i will need to re draw it to update it, ill post it here so you can see..


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    Babes Bastard re-touch



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    this is Dexter


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    he wasn'ta good idea so i made


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    Goliath Gauntlets



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    thanks again to form for helping my work the wording just right

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    ok so this is a new peice, comeing right after the May Fly. im trying to get things looking more technical and alittle less goofy, though goofy stuff is cool.
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