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    Electric!!!

    Hey guys, here's a painting of a recent sketch. Had a lot of fun on it. it was a pretty fast piece. About 2 hours.
    Crits & Comments are welcome.


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    looks cool. Anatomy needs a little work on the torso. keep it up!

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    Yes, anatomy could be improved.. You may want to check the lengths of the arms and such..
    I'd also advise investigateing space/depth in an image since this image currently lacks it (everything seems on one plane/ its flat).. experimenting with perspective may help improve this..
    I think the lightning/electricity is too soft and fuzzy, generally lighting is very sharp and crisp..
    I'd also suggest working with fabric more and learning how folds work.
    Hope this helps some..

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    Blahm- thanks a lot dude. I'll improve the anatomy.

    Kon- Thanks. The electricity was meant too be softer, just too see it diffrently, but your right it doesn't work. I'll make the arms a little bit longer. I'll work on the background. Thansk

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    And see if you can straighten this piece to perpendicular...

    What is it lately with everybody drawing their stuff leaning over to the left? Is everyone drawing while being on some big old ship leaning to port??? Electric!!!

    Last edited by madster; July 4th, 2005 at 06:49 PM.
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    well, I wouldn't just lengthen the arms, i'd also compare them to each other, as far as i can see, his left (our right) arm seems longer than his other arm..

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