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    Smoke: Thanks for the idea. I might play around with that. Originally I kind of wanted all the character sheets to have the same moody/foggy/mysterious background. But I'll try your idea out too.


    Update:
    Finalized some more pages. I revised a couple of panels from the Ice Story and laid in the text copy.

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    just great! I love your work

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    Thanks Ivan!

    Here's a new page.

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    The colors and the overall look of the pages are improving page after page. Really love how you painted the ocean in this last one. Really beautiful.

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    Thank you Placeboast!

    Update: Here's 2 more pages. I have to go in and add in some textures now, and change up the colors on the last 2 panels on the first page...to match the Night Time palette on the other page. I was having a tough time getting the night sky exactly the way I wanted it, and finally hit something that I liked with the second page - which I painted last night 11pm.

    I'm not painting these in order, but I'm about half way thru. Feels good to be getting this all done.

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    Update; Page 8

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    And here's page 7. (maybe I should have done these in order, probably would have made more sense story-wise.)

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    hey man this sketchbook is awesome and each of these pages is nicely done even by themselves let alone as part of a story - One crit I would suggest is perhaps have the impact of the creature more dramatic... the fact that you need words to suggest the impact probably tells you that something about the composition is a little off. If that slide was a little more dynamic, perhaps with some of the creature seen above the surface and more spray then the page would have much more impact. Just a thought

    Keep it up its looking awesome so far!

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    I'ld reduce the eye down to just a shadow in the water, but I really like these pages.

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    The comic's going awesome! Great storytelling and mood. I also love the planes in all the character's faces!

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    Eddieee: Thanks man. Glad you like!
    donalfall: I'll keep that in mind. Once I get all the pages down, I'm going to reexamine panels. But thanks.
    ThomasM: thanks Thomas. The whale doesn't actually really breach the surface here...and I don't want to show him yet. Basically he's just toying with them at this point. 2 pages down the line, he gets introduced on a full spread. (I posted a loose proof of it on the other page back)

    Update: Here's my chapter cover page.

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    I wan't to see more
    This some really cool stuff you have here and I can't wait for more to come, so please keep it up.

    Cheers

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    Thanks Steve G.!

    Update: New page...goes right after the cover. It's sorta still sketchy, and I'll clean it up next.

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    Update: New Page

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    NEW PAGE. This is the final page for the fishing tale.

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    woohooo adorable panels!! more...!

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    i just love your sketchbook avatar
    the comic looks cool

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    maeshanne: Heyy, thanks. Glad you stopped by.

    sone_one: Thank you!

    UPDATE: Here's another page. This one goes right after the Giant Eye Ball page.

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    Hi Jason!

    Very nice comic book pages, eyecandy!

    cheers

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    Love your stuff as always, dude. Your colors and style is just continuing to improve and I love watching it! My only crit is that it'd be nice for you to tighten up some elements of these to really draw the eye in a bit more. They all feel a bit too loose. I think it's ok to have a lot of the image feel that way as long as you draw the eye around to more fleshed out areas that pop a bit more. Keep it coming!

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    Thanks Zebz!

    Update: New Page (this one is 2 pages after the last one I posted) I kind of experimenting with this page...seeing what works or not.

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    Update: Just wanted to take a break from Werewhales today. I want to fill out the portfolio with a couple of pages of recognizable characters. I might do a DC one too if there's time.

    This will be fully painted eventually.

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    Hey Jason, still really enjoying your pages as they progress, and as you experiment with different stuff.
    I love what you did on the last page with the story, the red to blue to red etc. That looks really good.
    But my crit is gonna be you need to work on those sound effects. In my opinion sound effects NEED to be hand drawn so that they become part of the artwork not part of the text. I think youll get much more mileage out of it hand drawing it too, because you can really think about what you want the text to be doing and how the font/size/shape etc can help show that. At the moment, it stands out a lot and looks pretty stale, especially since they are pretty big sound effects.

    Keep up the good work though dude, youve been powering through these pages, will be awesome to see it all together.

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    great pages! nice mood/colors/storytelling,etc.. i love it!

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    the "werewhales" comic is excellent, love it. you really have a knack for it...also enjoyed looking through your sketchbook. nice work!

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    LisandroG: Thanks Lisa!

    Yor: Awesome, man. Thanks

    PHATandy: Hey...thanks for the suggestion. Yeah...I'm not happy with some of the larger Sound Fonts. I'm not sure if I can draw them out any better...but I get exactly what you're saying.

    UPDATE: Redid the double page spread. Just a couple more pages to go.

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    And here's a little update on the Spiderman page.

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    Little update:

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    Werewhale Update: Here's the last page that I'm going to post.

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    BIG NEWS!: Self-published!
    The Curse of the Werewhale has been sent to the printers and should be available for sale soon. My story is just a piece of the pie though. Me and my friend Chris thought up this idea a couple of years ago and over that time have asked other college friends to join in. The final book is 75 pages, has 4 stories (3 comic, 1 written) and includes a pin-up and sketchbook section.

    Softcovers are priced at $29.99 and Hardcovers are going for $39.99 (as a special incentive, the hardcover version will also feature a 2 pages Epilogue, which will preview where the book is going in the next issue. (More extra hardcover specials may be added as well)

    All of us have worked tremendously hard over the past few months getting this all done, and we appreciate any support you can give.

    To order the books, I'll be posting a website to the publisher soon, but for now, check out our studio website at http://artgasmstudios.com
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    Hi Jason, your pages are so fresh: I love your style and use of colors!
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