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    Show me the mistakes!!! if you can!

    PLs can you point my mistakes here. i've doing this for a long time. and damn is hard to figure out how should be the girl pose. !!



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    Readily, all I can see is that there's too much of the girl's boobs showing. They're also up too high.


    Remember, in male AND females, the nipples are about 1 head down from the chin, and 45 degrees out from the pit of the neck.

    Therefore, in a female, the bottoms of her breasts should be below the nipples, and thus more than 1 head length below the chin.

    Hmm... Seems like you took the height of her head in perspective to lay out her proportions. By doing that, everything relates well, but since her head is tilted down...

    Ah HA! Der... Just make her head smaller...

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    She should let go of his hand and grab a machine gun. But I digress. It's a very complicated pose and angle, but I think you're doing great so far. (boobs notwithstanding) Just clean it up and keep going.

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    Love the pose and angle.. Character doesn't look static so thats a plus..

    Just to add my only critique would be his chest is to big. Look at it in proportions to his arms. His tricep and delts should be larger if he had that type of chest because they are the assisting muscle groups in pushing excercises. The part were the pectorial major meets is to big. He would have to have a larger physique to accompany that mass in the chest.

    Other than that kick ass job man... Really like this piece thus far

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    Things I end up doing - try flipping it horizontally.
    Always shows up a mistake (sometimes vertically helps too!)

    You've kind of lost the stomach on his left side - just under the pectorals, makes him look pigeon chested!

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    This is pretty ok. Maybe look at ref for some details of body.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danilo
    This is pretty ok. Maybe look at ref for some details of body.
    i should lok at some references . but somethimes is good to find by your selft the mistakes and fix them. i think you can learn more . but reference is cool too Thanks!!!1

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