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    Wink Genie

    Heya, Guys,


    Haven´t posted in here i n a long while, here´s a couple sample pages from the comic I´m working on right now, Genie, from new publisher Funnel Cloud 9.



    Genie
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    Hope you like it.

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    These are great!

    The geneies head looks a little too large for her body, and her hands are small. I also thing her neck to is elongated. Not sure what that background is all about.

    The second battle is definately cool. Keep it up, dawg!

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    The genie needs a thighmaster. Damn those be meaty!

    Um, Parker? Perhaps your comments would make more sense if you specify what you find so great, as you then follow that blanket statement with four negatives about the first piece...

    The second piece is beautifully drawn, with great 3-point perspective, wonderful line and detail. It's so good it doesn't need coloring.

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    Hi, guys,

    Thanks for your input, I´m always eager for any feedback I can get my hands on and welcome all that you can throw my way.

    I´m glad you´ve liked the pages, you made some very good points about things I should keep an eye out for.

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